I Can'T Forget That Devotion

Where   can I find,
The greatest love than yours!
The love that took me completely,
Feeding me unconditionally,
Milking itself for its baby boy.
But let me count my days,
For I wasn't fair to it,
My days are countable than fingers,
Not long enough, I will die.

 My heart looses flesh,
Whilst its bones can’t stand,
It is empty and baggy,
As it won’t find again,
The greatest love as yours,
Love that can glue the broken chambers,
and make them one again.

Wishing you luck my girl,
Hope, you will find someone, who truly cares.
And deserve such kind of love
With protections and appreciations.
Go……! 
For I failed to protect your love
But I will forever remember you!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Jones Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 10:51 PM
Lucas this is sad....is it a breakup from someone you care about? It touches deep in the heart....a lovely poem...
Mkude Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 3:11 AM
Very sad mother...it was such a bad moment to me. But thanks God we went through this!
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