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I can't forget that Devotion

Where can I find, The greatest love than yours! The love that took me completely, Feeding me unconditionally, Milking itself for its baby boy. But let me count my days, For I wasn't fair to it, My days are countable than fingers, Not long enough, I will die. My heart looses flesh, Whilst its bones can’t stand, It is empty and baggy, As it won’t find again, The greatest love as yours, Love that can glue the broken chambers, and make them one again. Wishing you luck my girl, Hope, you will find someone, who truly cares. And deserve such kind of love With protections and appreciations. Go……! For I failed to protect your love But I will forever remember you!

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Date: 3/1/2014 10:51:00 PM
Lucas this is it a breakup from someone you care about? It touches deep in the heart....a lovely poem...
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Lucas Mkude
Date: 3/2/2014 3:11:00 AM
Very sad was such a bad moment to me. But thanks God we went through this!