I Cannot Say


I cannot say how poems come to be-
from just one thought to full reality.

I cannot say how I hunt down my words
to image themes like nature, flowers, birds.

Or then select a form to fit the theme;
be it free verse, haiku, or rhyming scheme.

Or count the syllables for metered flow;
select the feet of two or more to show

a rhythm, smooth or anapestic dance
to make the words behave or wildly prance.

Or think I'm done, but then see that I'm not;
to then rewrite and add what I forgot.

From just one thought to full reality-
I cannot say how poems come to be.


April 29, 2016

~1st Place~
Contest: Rhyming Couplets
Sponsor: Janice Canerdy
Judged: 05/25/2021

~9th Place~
Contest: Preterition
Sponsor: Sara Kendrick
Judged: 05/17/2016

Preterition is a poetic technique: drawing attention to 
something by claiming to omit it, but then really defining it 
by actually saying what you claim you cannot say.

Form: Couplet / Iambic Pentameter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lillico  Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 1:56 PM
Great win! M.
Agustin Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 2:38 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this poetic instruction in your awesome rhyming style. God bless you.
Canerdy Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Sandra, a huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved win in my contest! Janice
Devnath  Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Beautiful poem beautifully expressed with poetic style. Congrats on your win my lovely friend. A 7 and my fav. too. Loved always, bl
Lane Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 11:36 AM
I think you stated your intentions very well, but then you know how much I've always admired your poetry skills.
Haight Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Thank you very much, Lin. I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Kendrick Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 9:59 AM
This one uses the idea of Preterition very well..I enjoyed reading it..Congrats on your winning work. Thank you for participating in my contest...Sara
Haight Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 3:26 PM
I enjoyed participating and writing for your great contest, Sara. Thank you for my nice placement on your winners' list. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 12:01 AM
Writing poetry is really a chore, Sandra, I think you have captured the feeling well. A 7 and good luck in the contest. eve
Haight Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 8:41 PM
Thank you very much, Eve. I know you can certainly identify with this! I appreciate your nice comment and rating. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 11:02 PM
Very nicely penned Sandra....best wishes
Haight Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Sandra
Rv Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 2:22 PM
How unique!! I love your idea.. And your words are so beautiful!! All the best in the contest; hope this does very well!! :) :)
Haight Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Thank you once again, dear Sneha. Hugs, Sandra
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