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I Cannot Say

I cannot say how poems come to be- from just one thought to full reality. I cannot say how I hunt down my words to image themes like nature, flowers, birds. Or then select a form to fit the theme; be it free verse, haiku, or rhyming scheme. Or count the syllables for metered flow; select the feet of two or more to show a rhythm, smooth or anapestic dance to make the words behave or wildly prance. Or think I'm done, but then see that I'm not; to then rewrite and add what I forgot. From just one thought to full reality- I cannot say how poems come to be. April 29, 2016 ~1st Place~ Contest: Rhyming Couplets Sponsor: Janice Canerdy Judged: 05/25/2021 ~9th Place~ Contest: Preterition Sponsor: Sara Kendrick Judged: 05/17/2016 Preterition is a poetic technique: drawing attention to something by claiming to omit it, but then really defining it by actually saying what you claim you cannot say. Form: Couplet / Iambic Pentameter

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Date: 4/27/2021 1:56:00 PM
Great win! M.
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Date: 4/20/2021 2:38:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this poetic instruction in your awesome rhyming style. God bless you.
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Date: 4/19/2021 9:13:00 AM
Sandra, a huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved win in my contest! Janice
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Date: 5/19/2016 10:40:00 AM
Beautiful poem beautifully expressed with poetic style. Congrats on your win my lovely friend. A 7 and my fav. too. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/18/2016 11:36:00 AM
I think you stated your intentions very well, but then you know how much I've always admired your poetry skills.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/18/2016 3:25:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lin. I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/18/2016 9:59:00 AM
This one uses the idea of Preterition very well..I enjoyed reading it..Congrats on your winning work. Thank you for participating in my contest...Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/18/2016 3:26:00 PM
I enjoyed participating and writing for your great contest, Sara. Thank you for my nice placement on your winners' list. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/30/2016 12:01:00 AM
Writing poetry is really a chore, Sandra, I think you have captured the feeling well. A 7 and good luck in the contest. eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/30/2016 8:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve. I know you can certainly identify with this! I appreciate your nice comment and rating. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/29/2016 11:02:00 PM
Very nicely penned Sandra....best wishes
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/30/2016 8:40:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Sandra
Date: 4/29/2016 2:22:00 PM
How unique!! I love your idea.. And your words are so beautiful!! All the best in the contest; hope this does very well!! :) :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/30/2016 8:40:00 PM
Thank you once again, dear Sneha. Hugs, Sandra

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