I Can See the Sun Peaking Ahead

The sun brightens my day. The dreams brighten my mind. Looking into both, I can visualize my future. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The sunshine's every were, not just on earth.

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Rochelle Smith

Date: 5/4/2012 4:36:00 AM

great

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 5/1/2012 12:46:00 AM

For you are such a beautiful man in mind and spirit. Most of us go through life with one eye looking towards the future and the other eye gazing into the past. We can always learn a small degree from the nature. Your deepest roots are in nature. No matter who you are, where you live, or what kind of life you lead, you remain irrevocably linked with the rest of creation.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/30/2012 5:38:00 PM

Excellent one! So enlightening. Always, Laura

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2012 4:22:00 PM

Elliott, awonderful verse.. and a good head on your shoulders. In my mind the sun shines.. with deepness... .. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, always~ PD

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/28/2012 1:50:00 PM

Elliott, like always....well said and well done! - oxox love Anne-Lise