Jan Allison Poet Diamante

Notes About The Poem

I Can See Clearly - For Now

Sighted
Vision, perception
Staring, observing, gazing
Ability to see everything, total visual impairment
Stumbling, groping, touching
Darkness, sightless
Blind

Diamante Contest 
Sponsored by Janis Thompson

submitted to Diamante Poetry For Fun - Your Choice of Theme Poetry Contest
sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

10~12~16

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick October 22, 2016 at 2:13 PM Great topic chosen for the contest..Vision problems are not any fun..Congrats on your work being on the winners' page..Sara

Anisha Dutta October 22, 2016 at 9:57 AM Congrats JAN to win on wonderful poem. Hugs Jan Allison October 22, 2016 at 12:21 PM Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi October 21, 2016 at 8:59 PM A very moving contrast. I pray this is fictional. Perfect diamante. Congratulations and thanks for your entry. Blessings, Janis. Jan Allison October 22, 2016 at 12:21 PM It's based on my mum Janis she has age related macular degeneration and is losing her sight - it is heartbreaking as she can no longer do things she used to love and she gets very frustrated:-( hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel October 13, 2016 at 1:13 AM Great contrast, Jan:) Well done:) I entered an old one:) Jan Allison October 13, 2016 at 3:47 AM Thanks Jo I still have some work to do on this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe October 12, 2016 at 4:32 PM Amazing diamante with such a great contrast. Good luck on the contest, Jan. Jan Allison October 12, 2016 at 4:34 PM Thanks so much Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2016 at 3:20 PM Great contrasts, Jan. Nicely done. Soupmail. Jan Allison October 12, 2016 at 4:06 PM Thanks Andrea:-)hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray October 12, 2016 at 2:36 PM Such stark contrast brings home the horror so well Jan. Jan Allison October 12, 2016 at 2:46 PM Thanks Jean :-) it is heartbreaking for me to see how my mum struggles and she can no longer do what she used to do and that is SO frustrating to her - she feels so useless. I get her helping me in the kitchen - just drying the dishes is a joy to her as she can no longer do these tasks in the care home:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis October 12, 2016 at 1:52 PM Absolutely stunning diamond poem dear, Jan! A seven and a fave! Jan Allison October 12, 2016 at 2:05 PM Thanks Demetrios - your haiku I read today is so so wonderful and I will never forget your kindness when I first started trying to write that form and you helped me with the ending of one of my haiku poems:-) hugs jan xx

Darren White October 12, 2016 at 11:25 AM This is very special Jan. Winning or not, it's a favourite for me <3 Jan Allison October 12, 2016 at 11:30 AM Thanks Darren:-) I think it's the third poem of this form that I've written - this one hits home with mum losing her sight:- ( hugs Jan xx

DM Babbit October 12, 2016 at 11:18 AM Very nice and full of imagery. Good luck in the contest, Jan. Jan Allison October 12, 2016 at 11:19 AM Thanks DM the topic is close to my heart as my mum is almost blind life is so frustrating for her she cannot do things she used to love:-( hugs Jan xx

Chris Green October 12, 2016 at 9:27 AM This was really nice Jan. You wrote this perfectly. Jan Allison October 12, 2016 at 9:37 AM Thank you so much Chris I do appreciate you dropping by to comment:-) hugs Jan xx