I Can Not Play Many Game

i can't play many game
that's make me feel blame
cuz i work on ma dream 
so i can't give ya m name

listen if u want understand
life it's not a small stupid land
to create some lil crappy band
so dont give up cuz its not d end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 5:35 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Anasse - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Comporozos Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 8:23 AM
Smooth flowing rhythm, as Pandita has said!
Kamal Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 11:41 AM
thank's a lot as you know it's harder to be a singer and you do not have nothing to start with only some songs poemes in a book but i am thankful because everyone like my lyrics and they feel it and i hope some day make it real in songs that can anyone around the world hear it and feel it and thank you bro againe
Sietesantos Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 12:33 PM
What a creative piece this is, Anasse. I love the smooth flowing rhyming! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
Kamal Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 1:59 PM
nice hny that's sweet from you
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September 19, 2014 at 5:21 PM
Anasse, a great little rap, ha, I like it.. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Kamal Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 4:55 PM
What do u think about it it's a verse of one of my new rap songs :p hope u love it
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