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I Can Not Play Many Game

i can't play many game that's make me feel blame cuz i work on ma dream so i can't give ya m name listen if u want understand life it's not a small stupid land to create some lil crappy band so dont give up cuz its not d end

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/24/2014 5:35:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Anasse - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 9/23/2014 8:23:00 AM

Smooth flowing rhythm, as Pandita has said!

Anasse Kamal
Date: 9/23/2014 11:41:00 AM

thank's a lot as you know it's harder to be a singer and you do not have nothing to start with only some songs poemes in a book but i am thankful because everyone like my lyrics and they feel it and i hope some day make it real in songs that can anyone around the world hear it and feel it and thank you bro againe

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/20/2014 12:33:00 PM

What a creative piece this is, Anasse. I love the smooth flowing rhyming! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita

Anasse Kamal
Date: 9/20/2014 1:59:00 PM

nice hny that's sweet from you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2014 5:21:00 PM

Anasse, a great little rap, ha, I like it.. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anasse Kamal

Date: 9/19/2014 4:55:00 PM

What do u think about it it's a verse of one of my new rap songs :p hope u love it