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I Can Never Stop Seeking You

That I am this,
A pause.
Waiting until
You and I
Are us and we.
Fingers knitted,
Cuddled close.

Away from you
I am a locus.
A spark
Which blinds.
Overwhelming
With every
Thought of you.

Apart from you,
I only need
To follow
The desire
Of; my heart
Only knows you
Are what is missing

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Jan Allison

June 19, 2015 at 3:32 PM

what a lovely romantic write I especially love the final stanza :-) hugs jan xx

Courtney Courtney

June 18, 2015 at 2:01 AM

I like your style

Neil Nelson

June 18, 2015 at 11:09 PM

Thank you Courtney ^^

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 16, 2015 at 4:53 AM

- Welcome to P -Soup, Neil :) - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I see you have already posted several poems - Enjoy a place with many different "poets" - // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

June 15, 2015 at 1:33 AM

Neil, a wonderful write:), this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Neil Nelson

June 15, 2015 at 2:45 PM

Thanks SKAT :) got a lot of love to try and articulate right now so hoping to trickle a poem every few days at the moment o/

Poet Destroyer A

June 14, 2015 at 11:47 PM

Neil, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Neil Nelson

June 15, 2015 at 2:46 PM

Evening Linda, thanks for the compliment and welcome. More coming soon <3

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