I Can Feel It

It is all around me
The sickness
In my head
In my body

I just can't control it
How long will it take
To win this battle?
How long will it take?

My head is pounding
I don't know where to go
Who would understand?
That i'm dying all along
Dying so very slow

You can't see my sickness
It's in my body
And all in my bones and head
Is  it to late?

When would i be reborn?
When would i be better?
When would life be perfect again?
When would it all end?

I'm waiting for another day
When my body don't hurt anymore
When i'm not alone anymore
When i feel so much better

How is it possible
That i'm still alive?
I just don't understand
It just hurts so much everywhere
I feel like i'm going out of my mind
Please when will i die?

Please kill the pain inside me
Inside my brain, my body
Inside of my heart

When is late, to late?
When will it all end?
PLEASE KILL ME!!!
And take my hand
For the suffering will finally end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/15/2013 12:35:00 PM
it is a pitiful situation. an experience that needs God's intervention.thanks for revealing the other side of life. life is not full of roses all the time.
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