Darrell Rose Poet Rhyme

I Burned My Lips On Hers Today

I burned my lips on her’s today 
Though I have no one but myself to blame

‘Twas in the moment of our first kiss  
Our passion burst into a raging flame

I oft had admired her from a distance
Never knowing she was the Devil’s child

I knew the instant we began to dance
I’d lost my soul cause it got wild

She twisted my heart into a knot
And clouded my mind with smoke

But it was when I met her dad 
….. ( come on fellow poets !! 
Give me a great last line !)….
(….bloke, joke, cloak, poke…
Have some fun with me !)

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Beryl Edmonds March 25, 2023 at 12:07 PM Last line - “I felt myself begin to choke.” ~ Belle Darrell Rose March 25, 2023 at 4:01 PM Hahahaaha Yea….. I’m sure meeting the devil would make one choke rather deeply ! Thank you for the input ! Darrell

Charlotte Puddifoot March 24, 2023 at 1:20 PM well whatever the last line is, i hope it's as passionate as the rest of it! :) Darrell Rose March 25, 2023 at 3:57 PM Hahaha. If one elects to dance with the devil’s daughter I’m thinking they’ll be passionate about it !! Thanks for visiting. Darrell