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I Burned My Lips On Hers Today

I burned my lips on her’s today Though I have no one but myself to blame ‘Twas in the moment of our first kiss Our passion burst into a raging flame I oft had admired her from a distance Never knowing she was the Devil’s child I knew the instant we began to dance I’d lost my soul cause it got wild She twisted my heart into a knot And clouded my mind with smoke But it was when I met her dad ….. ( come on fellow poets !! Give me a great last line !)…. (….bloke, joke, cloak, poke… Have some fun with me !)

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Date: 3/25/2023 12:07:00 PM
Last line - “I felt myself begin to choke.” ~ Belle
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Darrell Rose
Date: 3/25/2023 4:01:00 PM
Hahahaaha Yea….. I’m sure meeting the devil would make one choke rather deeply ! Thank you for the input ! Darrell
Date: 3/24/2023 1:20:00 PM
well whatever the last line is, i hope it's as passionate as the rest of it! :)
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Darrell Rose
Date: 3/25/2023 3:57:00 PM
Hahaha. If one elects to dance with the devil’s daughter I’m thinking they’ll be passionate about it !! Thanks for visiting. Darrell

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