I Built a Fire

Built a fire on a frozen pond Ice melted and cracked I fell through and froze to death
Bt: Greg Stanley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 20, 2011 at 2:30 PM
I love this funny piece, Greg : )
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December 20, 2011 at 10:57 AM
ooops...I forgot to rate this....it only goes up to 7!! What if it was a 10??? Hmmmm.......
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December 20, 2011 at 10:56 AM
Greg Greg Greg...what were u thinking!? ha ha. This short lil diddy is hilarious! I shall write an obituary in response to this verse about your favorite movie being "On Golden Pond"... Fun stuff. Gwendolen
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