I Breathe Your Name

I breathe your name,in the silence of my heart
Your passion my awakening,your love my flame
With each rising of the sun my breath departs
Your presence is most stirring,divinity untamed.
These expiring crystalised tears would cease
For you tear the fetters of my mournful soul
Blazing up my world,the sweet fumes of peace
Makes life worth breathing,love uncontrolled.
Some men fight without reason,senseless form
Riches that expire -angels who smile like heaven
But you my lover are more than earthly charm
For you're the flames of love,a rose of heaven.

Thoughts and images of you scents my mind
In the silence of my heart,I breathe your name!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/29/2018 5:02:00 PM
Wooow ...just wow Mustapha
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:06:00 AM
Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, mustapha
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Date: 10/5/2013 10:02:00 PM
beautiful and simply breathtaking,Ivy
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Date: 9/1/2013 4:57:00 PM
I think you are one of the best romantic poets on this site! Such lovely and deeply soulful poetry! Keep up the fantastic work!
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Date: 8/29/2013 3:02:00 AM
YOU WANT CHECK OUT THAT BREATHING PAL LOVELY PIECE WATCH MY HEART STOP BEATING
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:16:00 PM
will I meant
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:15:00 PM
Yes I wll Liam...lol. Thanks for your kind review.
Date: 8/11/2013 7:30:00 AM
Simply breathtaking!
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:17:00 PM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 8/8/2013 4:40:00 PM
I really like your repeat line..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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Date: 8/7/2013 9:47:00 AM
This melts my heart !! "riches that expire-angels who smile like heaven".....those lines you have written are amazing !!! So much loveliness expressed!!
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Carrie, I'm humbled that you would say that.
Date: 8/5/2013 9:49:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Mustapha! This surely made her smile, I'm sure! Thanks for reading mine. Always, Annalise
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Annalise for your kind review on mines.
Date: 8/4/2013 10:27:00 AM
Love this Mustapha.Just amazing.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:17:00 PM
Thank you kash for the lovely review.
Date: 8/2/2013 3:37:00 PM
Moving and deeply hearfelt. Searching the soul for the beauty that comes out on your page... devine
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:23:00 PM
Thank you Karen for your lovely review.
Date: 8/2/2013 6:54:00 AM
This made my eyes swell, with tears...your touching words are, so real & soulful...~<3~ big hugz M:)
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:21:00 PM
Thank you dear Cherie...big hugz
Date: 8/2/2013 6:24:00 AM
Absolutely heavenly.....divinity untamed......amazing
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:19:00 PM
Thank you for that lovely review Eileen.
Date: 8/2/2013 5:42:00 AM
Stunning words of romance, love and beauty.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:20:00 PM
Thank you Monterey for your lovely review.
Date: 8/2/2013 5:18:00 AM
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Date: 8/29/2013 5:18:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 8/2/2013 5:17:00 AM
Beautiful Dearest M.M written from the soul Shadow x
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:14:00 PM
Thank dear friend for your lovely review. Its a pleasure to see you.
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