I Breathe Your Name

I breathe your name,in the silence of my heart
Your passion my awakening,your love my flame
With each rising of the sun my breath departs
Your presence is most stirring,divinity untamed.
These expiring crystalised tears would cease
For you tear the fetters of my mournful soul
Blazing up my world,the sweet fumes of peace
Makes life worth breathing,love uncontrolled.
Some men fight without reason,senseless form
Riches that expire -angels who smile like heaven
But you my lover are more than earthly charm
For you're the flames of love,a rose of heaven.

Thoughts and images of you scents my mind
In the silence of my heart,I breathe your name!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Thomas Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 5:02 PM
Wooow ...just wow Mustapha
Mehta Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 6:06 AM
Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, mustapha
Vresk Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 10:02 PM
beautiful and simply breathtaking,Ivy
Deschler Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 4:57 PM
I think you are one of the best romantic poets on this site! Such lovely and deeply soulful poetry! Keep up the fantastic work!
Mcdaid Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 3:02 AM
YOU WANT CHECK OUT THAT BREATHING PAL LOVELY PIECE WATCH MY HEART STOP BEATING
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:16 PM
will I meant
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:15 PM
Yes I wll Liam...lol. Thanks for your kind review.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 7:30 AM
Simply breathtaking!
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:17 PM
Thank you Richard.
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 4:40 PM
I really like your repeat line..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
Richards Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 9:47 AM
This melts my heart !! "riches that expire-angels who smile like heaven".....those lines you have written are amazing !!! So much loveliness expressed!!
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Thank you Carrie, I'm humbled that you would say that.
Haick Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 9:49 PM
Simply beautiful, Mustapha! This surely made her smile, I'm sure! Thanks for reading mine. Always, Annalise
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:25 PM
Thank you Annalise for your kind review on mines.
Poet Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 10:27 AM
Love this Mustapha.Just amazing.
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:17 PM
Thank you kash for the lovely review.
Anglesey Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 3:37 PM
Moving and deeply hearfelt. Searching the soul for the beauty that comes out on your page... devine
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:23 PM
Thank you Karen for your lovely review.
Thomas Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 6:54 AM
This made my eyes swell, with tears...your touching words are, so real & soulful...~<3~ big hugz M:)
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:21 PM
Thank you dear Cherie...big hugz
Manassian Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 6:24 AM
Absolutely heavenly.....divinity untamed......amazing
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:19 PM
Thank you for that lovely review Eileen.
Sirak Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 5:42 AM
Stunning words of romance, love and beauty.
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:20 PM
Thank you Monterey for your lovely review.
Hamilton Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 5:18 AM
7
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:18 PM
Thanks
Hamilton Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 5:17 AM
Beautiful Dearest M.M written from the soul Shadow x
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:14 PM
Thank dear friend for your lovely review. Its a pleasure to see you.
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