I Breathe Fire

As the mythical treasure of the Argonauts
illustrious eyes draw me in
the tendrils of your gaze
seeking the answer 
an unasked question
draping itself over my needs


I inhale


Abruptly your nearness
overwhelms
the brilliance of you
beckons to my spirit
As your nearness overtakes me
A need for air overcomes sense
reason reigns in need


I tremble


A catch in sigh
through gasping lips
Your first brush
throwing me into
cyclone of want
forever burns my skin
in the slow lava
you draw from me…


I exhale


Rapture from the heat
my master in the fires
sated in love 
I Breathe fire …
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Jayne. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 7:12 AM
Fascinating piece Jayne, congratulations on having it featured this week ;) Wilma
Shango Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 1:20 PM
Cool it down ... passion do not burn houses ... they burn hearts to tears. Beautiful poem ... it cools down my longing for the luxury of the write ... and make me contented to dwell in the beauty of your words alone. Bravo
Shahwan Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 11:10 AM
Fascinating.
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