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I Breathe Fire

As the mythical treasure of the Argonauts illustrious eyes draw me in the tendrils of your gaze seeking the answer an unasked question draping itself over my needs I inhale Abruptly your nearness overwhelms the brilliance of you beckons to my spirit As your nearness overtakes me A need for air overcomes sense reason reigns in need I tremble A catch in sigh through gasping lips Your first brush throwing me into cyclone of want forever burns my skin in the slow lava you draw from me… I exhale Rapture from the heat my master in the fires sated in love I Breathe fire …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2010 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Jayne. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2010 7:12:00 AM
Fascinating piece Jayne, congratulations on having it featured this week ;) Wilma
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Date: 5/26/2009 1:20:00 PM
Cool it down ... passion do not burn houses ... they burn hearts to tears. Beautiful poem ... it cools down my longing for the luxury of the write ... and make me contented to dwell in the beauty of your words alone. Bravo
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Date: 5/26/2009 11:10:00 AM
Fascinating.
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