I Blow My Kiss

With the wind this eve, I blow my kiss in perchance it makes your door It will sit and wait with the olive tree, the crimson rose, and all that you adore and in your morn when you appear it'll land softly 'pon your cheek there it'll rest til the day is done surrounded by mystique In the midst of night it'll start to speak as you begin to doze and dream of a life so sweet and a love so strong under stars that shine and gleam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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George   Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 4:50 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Tim. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Lainey
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely rhyme. Soft and warm.
Kimathi Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 6:51 AM
Congrats Tim, for your WIN with this awesome piece!! ;-)
White Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 10:58 PM
To blow a kiss to my love... to him receiving it like this? It's so wonderful, congratulations!
Y. Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Hi Tim, I found this piece to be romantic and so poetic as well. Congratulations on your fin win. It was well deserved:-)Alexis
Lindley Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 10:27 AM
My friend, not only is this a great love poem but it is also an extremely smooth flowing inspirational , concise rhyme ! A7 but truly this one deserves a super 10.. BRAVO!!!
Callus Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 6:18 PM
I love the romantic vein that runs through these beautiful lines, Tim. #7 // paul
Vaso Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 1:19 AM
beautiful, and the flow and this line "it'll land softly 'pon your cheek" amazing
Chircop Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 5:11 PM
Mystique !!!This rose that bleeds..and Olive trees..Lovely!
Smith Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 5:15 PM
yes mystique....charisma · glamour · romance · mystery · magic · charm · appeal : )
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 1:17 PM
I love this Tim! It is going into my favorites. One of your most romantic pieces I have read. 7
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 11:02 AM
very sweet and lovely writing. Romance in the air! (don't worry, I will always be a Peter pan child inside!!)
Trifiatis Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 5:16 AM
What a kiss! What a night! What a dream! Superb my friend, Tim! A seven!
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 4:25 PM
so beautiful and romantic Tim:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 6:24 PM
Thank you Jan
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