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I blaze in red Inside your head I scorch your bed In passion spread I come to taste With thoughts unchaste No time for haste Defense? Laid waste I come to seize With ways to please But first I tease A sultry breeze I come to light the darkest night and give delight with lover's bite I SEE I Conquer I...COME Eileen Manassian

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Jack Ellison

Date: 3/3/2015 4:33:00 PM

Whooooooaaaaaaa! You are BLAZING my dear Eileen! Yikeseroonie! Going to take a cold shower! Love Kenny xxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/2/2015 8:24:00 AM

I would say you are unstoppable my dear!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/2/2015 10:49:00 AM

Thanks, Richard. Doing a bit better today. I'm busy with family. Good that Dad and his wife are here while Hubby is away. Thank God.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/1/2015 8:26:00 PM

well written Eileen. Your words do spell out your aggression -JT

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/2/2015 2:23:00 AM

Thanks, JT...I was in a MOOD when I wrote this. Thanks for visiting, dear.

David Meade

Date: 3/1/2015 4:31:00 PM

The avenging warrior princess . . . no mortal male can withstand this love assault. At last, my pen for your love! Mighty is this conqueror in red!! Come now . . . LO. 7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/1/2015 5:14:00 PM

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_warrior_princess_487921 Have a taste of the Warrior Princess, Paul. You'll like her. Yes....Love assault. There is no other way. Knock the sense out of man and then have you way with him. ;) Your post is a delight to my eyes...I will let you live to tell the tale of our encounter.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2015 10:32:00 AM

In red you lay to waste all defenses...and take all! The play on Julius Caesar's words is a la manassian! hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/1/2015 5:07:00 PM

Thing is....Daddy is a poet as well, and he often asks about the site, but....I can't let him join. Where he to read my sensual writes....I'd be in for it. I do love him to bits and pieces. He is not just a pastor, but also an educator. He has his doctorate degree in education, his MA in theology. :) I'm taking him to class to meet my students tomorrow. He once came and gave a lecture on sexuality to them. I wish you could meet him. He's the best... :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/1/2015 5:07:00 PM

OK...typo...WERE he to read. I know that! Silly me.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/1/2015 3:39:00 PM

:) I agree :))

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/1/2015 3:18:00 PM

;) Oh dear...better be a la Eileen. My dad would NOT approve! He is a pastor, dear. Poor sweet daddy dearest. I've always been a bit of a rebel. He was after me about....make up, clothes, friendships. I loved to tease the poor dear. Belly dance an inch from his face so he'd frown. At my wedding....I was dancing away and he comes up to me and says..."Um....a little less shaking!" He's visiting me now...the sweetheart. I adore him. So...let's keep this...A la Eileen! ;)

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/1/2015 10:09:00 AM

You never let us down, Miss Boop! Another 7! Love and hugs, Kenny xxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/1/2015 3:19:00 PM

Thank you, Kenny. Love it when you visit me. Miss Boop is still going strong...Hugs back atcha!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 3/1/2015 6:30:00 AM

What a force you are. Fantastic write.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/1/2015 9:10:00 AM

Thanks, Scott. One of my fav poets complimented me on my avatar! This poem was the result! :) I've written a poem entitled, I'm the Warrior Princess. It stemmed from one of my students saying that I reminded him of Xena, the Warrior Princess. Well, this is the continuing story...Thanks for visiting. Hugs

Shane Cooper

Date: 3/1/2015 4:54:00 AM

Your words are sublime " I see I conquer I ...come" . I have never known a woman with your talent and passion. It is a brilliant write. I have run out of words to describe the emotions it stirs! Your work is the embodiment of love. Love Shane xxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/1/2015 9:08:00 AM

Thanks, Shane. You lift me up...and make me smile. Never think your words are without effect. They have a great impact on me Thanks every so much for your kindness. :) Hugs