I Belong To Thee {naga-Uta Lyric Form}

As I think of love
And how love once was for me
I simply must smile
As I recall past ladies
I rode on the wind
The same wind took them from me
So much history
Such beautiful memories
But those days are gone
And one thing so clear to see
My true love I live for thee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Torres Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 11:56 AM
Michael CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You deserv this my brother for as much effort that you put into it this is your reward savor it and enjoy. God bless you and your family love Michael Torres
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October 1, 2008 at 2:15 PM
bravo!!!!! SENSATIONAL, DEAR MICHAEL. CONGRATULATIONS!!! lainiel
Foster Avatar
September 21, 2008 at 3:49 AM
Congratulations Michael on a much deserved 1st place win :) I enjoyed the read my friend. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
Reynolds Avatar
September 19, 2008 at 3:49 AM
Congrats Michael onb your well deserved win in Brian's contest, a gorgeous lyric, love Kristin
Strand Avatar
September 19, 2008 at 12:02 AM
Congrats Michael on your well deserved success.I will be airmailing your prize in the next few days.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and observations
Cailo Avatar
September 18, 2008 at 5:09 PM
Congratulations for a deserving first place win :)
Winter Avatar
September 18, 2008 at 4:43 PM
Congratulations Michael on your First Place win in Brian's contest! YAY! I am so happy for you. Now maybe you can believe what an amazing talent you are! Absolutely well deserved! With love, Shar
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September 18, 2008 at 12:56 PM
Beautiful vision of love in this poem. Congratulations on placing first in Brian's Naga-Uta contest! Way to go my friend! I wish you continued success with your writing. I am so happy you were honored in way. Karen
Plath Avatar
September 18, 2008 at 5:01 AM
brillant stuff, well written and provoking
Buys Avatar
September 9, 2008 at 2:47 PM
Looking back made me smile. love how you ended this. Good one. regards Heidie
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September 8, 2008 at 8:49 AM
michael l love this thank u so much for your comment on my poetry, and congradulations on your newfound love of jesus. i will definitely email u, and keep in contact. this poem takes me back when i went through relationships and dating, and when all else failed,(which is a long story) i found my one true love was the lord all along, and he taught me to put him 1st in everything. i am looking forward to talking to u i just put a new one in if youde like to read god bless c u soon
Strand Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 11:47 PM
Michael thanks for entering my contest...your poem meets all the requirements...I wish you well with this format as you have a talent for the lyrical form ,as you always write from the heart.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my postings
Foulk Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 8:57 PM
a very heart felt and warm piece of lovely poetry.
Dover Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 6:55 PM
Solucky to have held onto one!Thanks for all the comments-i should have been reciprocating-just so busy1i have a website-www.artbyanthony.co.uk which might be of interest.Anthony
Matheny Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 3:19 PM
I have a boyfriend. He has been my friend for three years now and we decided to finally go out with each other.
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September 7, 2008 at 2:47 PM
Thanks for your thoughts and prayers Michael. They will do all the pre-ops on Monday. I see the doctors on Wednesday for the final instructions. This is a lovely poem. It flows very well. I like the affirmations. Great job! ~Joseph
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September 7, 2008 at 10:10 AM
It's a fond memory to recall, who we've met in the past, where we've been, is who we become. But the end of your poem says it all. ~ Lovely!, Carrie
Winter Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 7:19 AM
It is fun to look back and remember past loves. But we are truly the lucky ones who can say say what you did in your last line. Beautiful. Love, Shar
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September 7, 2008 at 5:50 AM
i can never see life without love somewhere out there there is a girl with my name on her. i wish i could feel her like i use to. great memories and ideals. JHL
Reynolds Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 4:16 AM
A beautiful, love-filled lyric. Love and blessings, Kristin
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