Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

I Became Whole

I bow down to these emotions 
I let them lead my heart
Gave in to all these notions
I did when our lips did part

Our essence became one
As you touched my very soul
Your love caressed my heart 
I finally felt whole

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Richard Lamoureux September 7, 2019 at 8:37 AM This is a pretty one. Hugs Rick. Brenda Chiri September 7, 2019 at 11:26 AM Lol thank you Rick! I did not know I wrote pretty but I love the thought of it!;) a writer of pretty poetry ummm sounds great!;)

Andrea Dietrich August 21, 2019 at 3:01 PM Beautiful, Brenda! Brenda Chiri August 21, 2019 at 3:04 PM Andrea thank you so much! Nice new pic too!;)

John Fleming August 21, 2019 at 7:54 AM Lovely little poem...almost like a "good night" prayer. Nicely crafted, Brenda. Enjoyed! With affection. :) john Brenda Chiri August 21, 2019 at 10:15 AM John thank you so very much! You and WK it seems are my biggest readers!;) All my affection!;)