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I Became Whole

I bow down to these emotions I let them lead my heart Gave in to all these notions I did when our lips did part Our essence became one As you touched my very soul Your love caressed my heart I finally felt whole

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/7/2019 8:37:00 AM

This is a pretty one. Hugs Rick.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/7/2019 11:26:00 AM

Lol thank you Rick! I did not know I wrote pretty but I love the thought of it!;) a writer of pretty poetry ummm sounds great!;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2019 3:01:00 PM

Beautiful, Brenda!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/21/2019 3:04:00 PM

Andrea thank you so much! Nice new pic too!;)

John Fleming

Date: 8/21/2019 7:54:00 AM

Lovely little poem...almost like a "good night" prayer. Nicely crafted, Brenda. Enjoyed! With affection. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/21/2019 10:15:00 AM

John thank you so very much! You and WK it seems are my biggest readers!;) All my affection!;)