Get Your Premium Membership

I Ate No Goodies For a Year

I ate no goodies for a year
lost weight as fast as others put it on
sixty-four pounds gone
did it one of the worst possible ways
ate lettuce
drank water
for a year
nothing else passed my lips
my tiny waist was laughable
my mother offered to make me a suit
she did, and it was marvelous except way too small
I laughed when I saw it.
That’s a baby suit, I told her. I cannot wear that!
The waist was only twenty-eight inches.
my mother had measured wrong!
She told me to try it.
The waist was too big; I could spin the skirt.
my mother had made a point
while I was seeing myself heavy
others knew I was starving myself
I began to eat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/15/2020 7:21:00 AM
they say an empty tummy is an unhappy tummy... wow just lettuce.. damn.. enjoyed your poem..
Login to Reply
Krutsinger Avatar
Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/16/2020 8:54:00 PM
Thankyou
Date: 2/14/2020 8:15:00 PM
I have been there and those with eating disorder can relate as can most to an extent, we never see ourselves as others...I have a couple anorexic type poems I have written... good penning! hugs
Login to Reply
Krutsinger Avatar
Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/16/2020 8:54:00 PM
Thank you

Book: Reflection on the Important Things