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I asked but He said no, so I moved on. I asked again, but did He hear? Perhaps He was not near. I asked a third time, and He said, you are mine have no fear. As I care for the sparrows and the flowers, that much more do I care for thee! Yes, I know God my Father cares for me, He gives me what I need, though sometimes I may disagree.

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Date: 8/22/2024 5:42:00 AM
Wow. Love this poem. Thank you for blessing us with it.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 8/22/2024 5:44:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 8/21/2024 6:04:00 PM
This is a feisty, very cute poem.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 8/21/2024 6:22:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/21/2024 12:28:00 PM
and therein lies the point of free will, dear poet...a precious gift
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Date: 8/21/2024 6:22:00 PM
Indeed!

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