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I ASK MY GRANDSON

I asked my grandson, …what is my favorite thing to do,” after he asked the round table. “To play with me, of course.” “Of course, I love playing with you…” “and?” and “praising God” - oh how much better he knows me, than I know myself. I chuckle. “and?” I prompt, “and writing poetry.” “Oh yeah,” he says. I guess I don’t know me at all. Only after I asked my grandson, did I realize there is a better priority. Still, I think my husband must wonder where he fits in. …somewhere in between, woven in, with those brown eyes and kissable lips, often up on top, sometimes he slips between the sheets; still a grandkid comes to visit and he says “hello,” slips downstairs, and waits until the door opens to say, “goodbye,” then heads upstairs and winks, and I think, ‘no rest for me.’

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Date: 5/29/2024 4:20:00 AM
Agree with you Kim, our grand kids are much kinder and more loving than our children. Our one and only grand daughter or grandchild for that matter is 16 months old and waddles in with her little legs to either pappou or yiayia her naivety is priceless but her love and kindness i know, will always be there. Beautiful poem dear Kim. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2024 6:28:00 AM
Thank you, likewise, for sharing your thoughts and lovely words about your granddaughter! May God bless you abundantly with all the enjoyment that precious life brings! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 5/27/2024 7:28:00 PM
Your grandson knows you 'better than you know yourself,' as indicated. And truly, how CAN we know ourselves? Very hard to be an 'impartial' or even partial bystander of one's self! Kudos, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2024 5:34:00 AM
Utterly true! We must rely on each other to see more than we do. At least grandkids are usually kinder than our kids.
Date: 5/27/2024 6:09:00 PM
How wonderful that your grandchild knows you so well! It seems like you had a full and fulfilling life. What a touching tale! You did an excellent job of describing your grandson and the bond you share with him. Perfect for a relaxing evening read. A fave
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/27/2024 6:59:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad! You are a good friend!
Date: 5/27/2024 5:28:00 PM
Making memories....so wonderfully written as always
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/27/2024 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! :)
Date: 5/27/2024 1:55:00 PM
Great that your grandson knows you so well and that you have a well-rounded life. I enjoyed reading your dialogue. thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/27/2024 2:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, sweet poetry sister! xx

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