I Ask

As I drag this rough frame, this ageing shell,
that's carried me across a lifetime to this place
at your feet, I look into your eyes and I ask you  

Imagine a proud, wavy crown of auburn hair,
thick and strong, a crown you could 
run your fingers through and twirl it, to and fro

Imagine these blue eyes that my father gave me,
still the deepest hue, but sparkling then with no glint 
of the sadness that they have come to show

Imagine a face, smooth and fair,
no beard of white, no furrowed brow,
with a smile that would melt your heart  

Imagine a laugh with no halt or apology, 
in that happy way of youth, a laugh
that called out others to come play

Imagine these arms, then like hawser ropes,
sinews at the ready to hold you tight,
to carry you clear across the world

Imagine this body, like a carving
in those days past, lean and muscled,
wanting for your hands to find their purchase 

Imagine now this man, still gentle and kind
but with that blinding glow of youth, waiting,
proudly at your feet to do your bidding

I ask you then, imagine when you
look on this ageing shell, this mortal husk;
that glow still waits inside for you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chircop Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 4:53 PM
That glow will never fade in a person whose young at heart-A beautiful romantic poem.
Brown Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 5:24 PM
Thank you Charmaine. For some reason (maybe my age) this one is special to me
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