I Am Winter

I Am Winter

I am cold – not heartless,
nor do I wish any harm.
This is just the way it is,
my gaze - a shivering chill,
my kiss - a frosty sting,
my breath - a numbing touch.

I come alone – uninvited
unwelcome, unappreciated
to lull to sleep the cycles
that need rejuvenation.

I am angry – for you fear me -
shut your doors, lock your windows,
deny me but your harshest looks
wrap yourselves in layers
lest we touch.

I am saddened – thus I whine
dancing around your houses
bending low the cowering trees
weeping sub zero tears
that never fall.

I am Winter –
and when my time is done
you will rejoice that I have gone
never thanking me –
for the beauty that awaits.


John G. Lawless
12/17/2014

Submitted to PD’s – Winter Poems #1 – Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kaufman Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 4:07 AM
Hi John, This unique perspective of yours, your voice, is deserving of a wider audience. I really loved this older piece and now will add it to my fav collection.
Pandit Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Came across this beautiful poem from 2014..well written.. articulate words.
Brewer Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 10:18 AM
A beautiful poem, precisely and exquisitely worded. I often wonder about ‘free verse’ but this one gave me an aesthetic, emotional and almost physical thrill.
Johnson Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Very visual and impacting. I like the irony at the end. Great poem.
Cegalis Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:45 AM
What an absolutely beautiful poem! What perfect time to be reading it since it is now bitterly cold.
Nipas Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Yes, why not appreciate the beauty of winter? Beautiful words. Thank you.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 12:29 AM
This is one of your best John. Each season has its purpose and each counts on the other to survive. ; ) 7
Lawless Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 8:01 AM
Thank you for the compliment Connie. As it says somewhere "and a time for every season under heaven"...appreciate your support and high marks.
Kroll Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 10:35 AM
Your poem really grabbed me! I can feel winter sitting in the heat of the summer. Great write. Glad to find your poems. Kathy
Lawless Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Kathy, glad you found the poems also and glad you like it. Thanks for stopping to read and comment.
Trichet Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 8:57 PM
Excellent write John, beautiful flow throughout and the last stanza is superb. A fave for me
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 5:08 PM
this is fantastic. So far all the winter poems are winners for me
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Genius, my friend!!!... Faving this one.. Congrats on a great win!...... Hugs... Arlene
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 1:27 PM
great job on this write ,nicely done, congratulations on your win
Haight Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 10:14 AM
I love your personification of Winter, John, and the way she speaks to us feeling that we have no use for her even though she prepares the way for rebirth in Spring. I very unique perspective. Congrats on your win! 7+Fav, Sandra
Kayode Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 10:19 PM
I love your personification John,congrats on the win...huggs
Mehta Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 9:02 PM
Winter nicely personified, congrats on the win
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:42 PM
Such beautiful imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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January 17, 2015 at 7:23 PM
John, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 7:54 PM
Very nice pen John! Enjoy read dear friend. A 7 for you! Wish you a very Merry Chritmas and yours! :) Love and light! xxx D.
Lawless Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 7:59 PM
Thanks Dorian and a Merry Christmas to you also.
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