Anonomus Scorpio Poet Free verse

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I Am Who I Want To Be

Who knew you were so mechanically incline
My cardiac specialist, you fixed the broken in mine
Who knew you possessed such a green thumb
Growing feelings in a salted heart that was numb
Who knew you could build something out of nothing
Filling the void, the abyss, the hole with your everything
Who knew you could be a blanket wrapping me
Without disillusion, with you, I am who I want to be

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Miranda Hawley May 18, 2023 at 8:06 PM A poem on identity, a very well written one at that. Anonomus Scorpio May 19, 2023 at 5:48 AM Thank you so much Miranda! Warmly A.S.

Michelle Morris May 18, 2023 at 3:41 AM Thank you for sharing this interesting and thought-provoking poem. Take care and enjoy your day. :-) Anonomus Scorpio May 19, 2023 at 5:47 AM You're absolutely welcome Michelle. I'm very happy that you were able to take interest in this piece. Cordially A.S.

Brian Sambourne May 17, 2023 at 9:11 PM A great evening of reads discovering your portfolio. Word combinations like "a salted heart that was numb" are truly inspired writing. Best wishes, Brian Anonomus Scorpio May 19, 2023 at 5:46 AM Thank you for the warm and appreciative compliments Brian! I appreciate greatly you taking the time to read my work. Kindest regards A.S.

Paige Hind March 15, 2023 at 10:43 AM WOW! Well done, A.S.! Beautiful. Anonomus Scorpio March 15, 2023 at 8:32 PM Your compliments mean a great deal thank you very much! A.S.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 14, 2023 at 10:56 AM Sweetness this. A warming write. Enchanté! xomo Anonomus Scorpio March 14, 2023 at 11:00 AM Thank you so much glad you enjoyed it Mo! Warmest A.S.

Paula Goldsmith March 12, 2023 at 10:56 AM "I am who I want to be" is a lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away............... Anonomus Scorpio March 14, 2023 at 10:59 AM Thank you very much Paula for the extra kind words! A.S.

Daniel Turner March 11, 2023 at 11:58 AM Must be a lovely muse who whispered this in your ear, AS. Very nice! Anonomus Scorpio March 11, 2023 at 4:26 PM I am very blessed to have my muse all the time:) thank you for the wonderful compliment Daniel! Best regards A.S.