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I Am Who I Want To Be

Who knew you were so mechanically incline My cardiac specialist, you fixed the broken in mine Who knew you possessed such a green thumb Growing feelings in a salted heart that was numb Who knew you could build something out of nothing Filling the void, the abyss, the hole with your everything Who knew you could be a blanket wrapping me Without disillusion, with you, I am who I want to be

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 5/18/2023 8:06:00 PM

A poem on identity, a very well written one at that.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/19/2023 5:48:00 AM

Thank you so much Miranda! Warmly A.S.

Michelle Morris

Date: 5/18/2023 3:41:00 AM

Thank you for sharing this interesting and thought-provoking poem. Take care and enjoy your day. :-)

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/19/2023 5:47:00 AM

You're absolutely welcome Michelle. I'm very happy that you were able to take interest in this piece. Cordially A.S.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 5/17/2023 9:11:00 PM

A great evening of reads discovering your portfolio. Word combinations like "a salted heart that was numb" are truly inspired writing. Best wishes, Brian

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/19/2023 5:46:00 AM

Thank you for the warm and appreciative compliments Brian! I appreciate greatly you taking the time to read my work. Kindest regards A.S.