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I Am Who I Want To Be

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Who knew you were so mechanically incline
My cardiac specialist, you fixed the broken in mine
Who knew you possessed such a green thumb
Growing feelings in a salted heart that was numb
Who knew you could build something out of nothing
Filling the void, the abyss, the hole with your everything
Who knew you could be a blanket wrapping me
Without disillusion, with you, I am who I want to be

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Miranda Hawley Date: 5/18/2023 8:06:00 PM A poem on identity, a very well written one at that. Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 5/19/2023 5:48:00 AM Thank you so much Miranda! Warmly A.S.

Michelle Morris Date: 5/18/2023 3:41:00 AM Thank you for sharing this interesting and thought-provoking poem. Take care and enjoy your day. :-) Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 5/19/2023 5:47:00 AM You're absolutely welcome Michelle. I'm very happy that you were able to take interest in this piece. Cordially A.S.

Brian Sambourne Date: 5/17/2023 9:11:00 PM A great evening of reads discovering your portfolio. Word combinations like "a salted heart that was numb" are truly inspired writing. Best wishes, Brian Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 5/19/2023 5:46:00 AM Thank you for the warm and appreciative compliments Brian! I appreciate greatly you taking the time to read my work. Kindest regards A.S.

Paige Hind Date: 3/15/2023 10:43:00 AM WOW! Well done, A.S.! Beautiful. Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 3/15/2023 8:32:00 PM Your compliments mean a great deal thank you very much! A.S.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 3/14/2023 10:56:00 AM Sweetness this. A warming write. Enchanté! xomo Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 3/14/2023 11:00:00 AM Thank you so much glad you enjoyed it Mo! Warmest A.S.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/12/2023 10:56:00 AM "I am who I want to be" is a lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away............... Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 3/14/2023 10:59:00 AM Thank you very much Paula for the extra kind words! A.S.

Daniel Turner Date: 3/11/2023 11:58:00 AM Must be a lovely muse who whispered this in your ear, AS. Very nice! Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 3/11/2023 4:26:00 PM I am very blessed to have my muse all the time:) thank you for the wonderful compliment Daniel! Best regards A.S.