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It was a lovely summer the garden was filled with butterflies. Whammy the caterpillar was full of joy. He climbed the tallest stalk in the flower bed. Maybe he could see the beautiful butterflies. They might even play with him. “Hello” he said as he greeted a very colorful flutter by. Poor Whammy was in for a huge disappointment. She laughed at him, called to all her butterfly friends. She ridiculed Whammy she actually called him an ugly crawly thing. If it was anyone else but Whammy this story may have had a disastrous ending. Whammy just slid down found his other caterpillar friends. They all wanted to know about the butterflies. Whammy told his friends that the flutter bys were even more beautiful from close. He said he was unfortunate he met one who was mean and shallow inside. That night Whammy prayed. First he prayed that the flyer he met would find the kindness that was surely within her. Then he prayed for other Caterpillars who might have the same experience. He knew that at first he felt bad really bad. He felt bad for not being as beautiful as the flyer. Then Whammy remembered, beauty is to be appreciated not envied. "Besides" Whammy thought "I'm quite dapper myself" as he straightened his imaginary tie and laughed. He wished that no creature large or small that no life form would ever feel like less. “If I was a butterfly I would be kind to everyone, imagine that me a flutter by” he said out loud. As our story ends Whammy falls asleep. Laughing and content Just to be happy. Imagine that - a scary caterpillar becoming a beautiful butterfly? Moral Of the story: “Attitude is Everything”. 01~11~2014 Maurice Yvonne Sponsor: Carol Eastman Contest Name: Fable to the Rescue

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Date: 11/22/2014 3:52:00 PM
Glad to see whammy on the winners' list!! big congrats to you, Maurice. You picked a moral VERY fitting for this one. and in light of all MY problems, a moral for me to try to use as a mantra!!
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Date: 11/19/2014 6:54:00 PM
Maurice, I love your cute, imaginative fable with such a great moral. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 11/19/2014 6:41:00 AM
Wonderful story....Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/19/2014 6:17:00 AM
Hi Maurice, This is a fun story with a great moral. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl
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Date: 11/19/2014 1:00:00 AM
And Whammy's attitude was just right. A great moral tale. Congratulations. Love, joyce
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Date: 11/18/2014 7:06:00 PM
Fantastic Maurice, one of my personal favorites.
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Date: 11/18/2014 4:15:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Maurice.
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:52:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Maurice:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:38:00 AM
You are master toaster Maurice,congrats on the worthy win...huggs
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Date: 11/1/2014 7:22:00 PM
I have fallen in love with Whammy. Great Fable Maurice.
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Date: 11/1/2014 1:12:00 PM
FANTASTIC fable, and I was really expecting to see you turn him into the most beautiful flutter by of them all at the end!! But that would make it too much like the ugly duckling story, so the way you concluded is perfect, maurice. FAVE.
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Date: 11/1/2014 1:04:00 PM
wonderful story and great moral and I too love writing about butterflies - into faves and good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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