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I am vaporizing in your eyes

I am vaporizing in your eyes slowly Noiselessly, clearly and helplessly Am I willing to be absorbed as steam? No! my feeling is no but wordlessly I am vaporizing in your eyes helplessly As immediate as I saw you saw me You turned me into steam softly What should I do immediately? Seeping into your soul completely? Or hiding into cloud urgently?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/4/2019 6:41:00 AM
An Amazing free verse, Xuefeng.. Wonderfully done and unique!! Really enjoyed !! Have a blessed day...
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Xuefeng Pan
Date: 2/5/2019 8:44:00 PM
Thanks Robertina, wish you a very lucky year of pigs(Chinese lunar year),take care!
Date: 1/15/2019 2:17:00 PM
Hello Xuefereno, you have created a lovely poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Xuefeng Pan
Date: 1/16/2019 12:54:00 AM
Dear Darlene, I thank you so much for your encouraging words, and also feel very lucky for having you here, my friend! Take care! Sincerely Xuefeng Pan
Date: 1/12/2019 4:53:00 PM
I steamed with this incredible write myself. Absolutely stunning!
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Xuefeng Pan
Date: 1/12/2019 7:50:00 PM
Cheers Chantelle! Best wishes indeed! Sincerely Xuefeng