Xuefeng Pan Poet Free verse

I Am Vaporizing In Your Eyes

I am vaporizing in your eyes slowly 
Noiselessly, clearly, and helplessly
Am I willing to be absorbed as steam?
No! my feeling is no but wordlessly

I am vaporizing in your eyes helplessly
As immediate as I saw you saw me
You turned  me into steam  softly

What should I do immediately?
Seeping into your soul completely?
Or hiding into the cloud urgently?

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Robertina B. February 4, 2019 at 6:41 AM An Amazing free verse, Xuefeng.. Wonderfully done and unique!! Really enjoyed !! Have a blessed day... Xuefeng Pan February 5, 2019 at 8:44 PM Thanks Robertina, wish you a very lucky year of pigs(Chinese lunar year),take care!

Darlene De Beaulieu January 15, 2019 at 2:17 PM Hello Xuefereno, you have created a lovely poem. have a nice day my friend. Xuefeng Pan January 16, 2019 at 12:54 AM Dear Darlene, I thank you so much for your encouraging words, and also feel very lucky for having you here, my friend! Take care! Sincerely Xuefeng Pan