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I Am Vaporizing In Your Eyes

I am vaporizing in your eyes slowly Noiselessly, clearly, and helplessly Am I willing to be absorbed as steam? No! my feeling is no but wordlessly I am vaporizing in your eyes helplessly As immediate as I saw you saw me You turned me into steam softly What should I do immediately? Seeping into your soul completely? Or hiding into the cloud urgently?

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Robertina B.

Date: 2/4/2019 6:41:00 AM

An Amazing free verse, Xuefeng.. Wonderfully done and unique!! Really enjoyed !! Have a blessed day...

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 2/5/2019 8:44:00 PM

Thanks Robertina, wish you a very lucky year of pigs(Chinese lunar year),take care!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/15/2019 2:17:00 PM

Hello Xuefereno, you have created a lovely poem. have a nice day my friend.

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 1/16/2019 12:54:00 AM

Dear Darlene, I thank you so much for your encouraging words, and also feel very lucky for having you here, my friend! Take care! Sincerely Xuefeng Pan