I Am the Snow

I am the snow, letting go from the gray sky above
Floating light as feathers, as if fallen from a dove
My snowflakes are all sizes, each one of its own
I fall delicately downward or sideways with wind blown
I cover the ground like a blanket and trace branches like art
Flakes come together upon landing after free falling apart
I create fun for children, who play and make a snowman
Bringing smiles through storms to anyone they can
I tickle noses, decorate hats and cool people’s tongue
I often fall in places where carols have been sung
I am heavy to shovel, so be careful with your back
If you ever get lost, find and follow your own track
I don’t like to get dirty, but sand keeps people safe on roads
Those dump trucks that like to move me, carry by the loads
So just remember me pure, happy, soft and white
Each winter, I will bring you a fresh, pretty new sight

Heidi Sands

2/25/22

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 3/3/2022 3:28:00 AM
Great imagery and nice personification dear Heidi...Best wishes and hugs...~ Ani
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/3/2022 5:46:00 AM
Thank you Ani. I appreciate your kind comment :)
Date: 2/27/2022 10:59:00 AM
So beautiful, Heidi. Gives snow an identity, both good and bad. A well done verse, special.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/27/2022 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. I appreciate your kind comment :)
Date: 2/26/2022 2:52:00 PM
Love the optimism Heidi! Well done!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/26/2022 3:00:00 PM
Thanks so much James. I appreciate your comments. :)
Date: 2/26/2022 5:40:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR 2ND LAST LINE hEIDI MY FRIEND, BECAUSE WE HARDLY EVER SEE SNOW, AND WHEN WE DO ONCE EVERY 10 YEARS MAYBE, I REMEMBER IT ALWAYS AS WHITE AND PURE, SORRY SAW CAPS. I'M SORRY HEIDI! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/26/2022 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Jennifer. I am happy you love it. Hugs and Blessings :)
Date: 2/26/2022 4:46:00 AM
A pristine voice to your poem, Heidi. Enjoyed the ode to snow. It is a comforting site to look and much joy to write about as you so well illustrate. A beautiful poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/26/2022 4:54:00 AM
Hi Vijay. Thank you for the kind feedback. I am always happy when you come by. I hope you have a pleasant day :)
Date: 2/25/2022 10:49:00 PM
Beautiful personification Heidi! You paint a vivid picture for me who does not experience snow.. Hope you are well :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/26/2022 2:50:00 AM
Thank you Wilma. I am happy to hear that. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 2/25/2022 1:46:00 PM
I'm disappointed Heidi as we only had a sprinkle this year and in a few weeks spring will be here, looks like you had it all this year. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/25/2022 1:54:00 PM
Wow Tom, only a sprinkle! Yes, we had a a lot of cold and snow this winter. Recently, we had a brief spell of mild weather, but now we are back in it. I hope you have a nice weekend too. Thank you :)
Date: 2/25/2022 1:39:00 PM
Remebring the beautiful pristine flakes, Very nice Personification Heidi..
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Date: 2/25/2022 1:40:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your visit and comment :)
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