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I AM THE ONE

In the depths of my heart I feel your presence When I laugh you hear my silent tears When I am still you hear my throbbing heart Who are you from whom I cannot hide? In my darkest hour you see me in light If I go to the caverns you are there If I hide beneath the deep you are there Who are you from whom I cannot hide? When I sing you detect tears in my voice When I dance you see my faltering steps When I dream you are there beside me Who are you from whom I cannot hide? When I pray you lend me your ears When I am mistreated you open a doorway to freedom When I am angry you chasten me Who are you from whom I cannot hide? Today you touched my heart Today I heard you whisper All things are possible with me I am the One from whom you cannot hide. * This poem is inspired by verses from Psalm 139.

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Date: 9/1/2009 11:26:00 AM
When I am mistreated you open a doorway to freedom. Great line.
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Date: 2/13/2009 7:25:00 AM
Thank you for your blog comment today Meg.rgds Brian
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Date: 2/10/2009 6:26:00 AM
Truly thoughtful! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/9/2009 3:14:00 AM
Wow! you are sure an excellent writer. Your poems are so good and true, how lucky i am, i am sure going to learn a lot.
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Date: 2/9/2009 3:10:00 AM
Thanks for your encouragement, you were actually the first to place a comment on my poem.
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Date: 2/7/2009 1:10:00 AM
That's swell..you excel Meg.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words.Have a good weekend.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/6/2009 1:16:00 PM
Just lovely you Margaret he sees you and all the wonderful words you create! Uplifting poem! Laura :)
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Date: 2/6/2009 7:53:00 AM
A beautiful psalm Meg.One for my fabourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my postings and blog
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Date: 2/6/2009 2:30:00 AM
Beautiful, and filled with light, like the poetess herself. :) Love, Kristin
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Date: 2/5/2009 12:54:00 PM
Beautiful.
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Date: 2/5/2009 12:36:00 PM
You have such deep spiritually within you, and you write it so beautiful. I am inspired by your words. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/5/2009 12:28:00 PM
Yes, higher power is within and without we are awash in higher power. Thanks for reading my blog. More NA material to come. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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Date: 2/5/2009 10:22:00 AM
Well said in this piece. There are so many truths in those words.
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