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I Am the Heron

I AM THE HERON There is a stoicism to me silent, self reliant, pensive posturing suddenness of intent and action. My aggression is calculated, measured in response to need, activated by impending threat. Stillness is the garb of my determination, patience in the solitude of calm spring loaded – a sharpened, piercing, beak. I still retain my forebears ways, their ancient chiseled features, dedication to the rookery’s domain amid the din of springs cool birthright. I will cross swords defending nests asway in natures treetop rocking chairs. There is a stoicism to me //Heron – aggressive, self determination,, self reliance// submitted to – Picture Yourself As a Bird – Poetry Contest sponsor – Andrea Dietrich 5/16/2015

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Date: 6/14/2015 12:26:00 AM
A wonderful write that I am glad I came back to read.
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Date: 6/14/2015 12:25:00 AM
A wonderful write that I am glad I came back to read.
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Date: 5/28/2015 7:47:00 AM
So dignified, both the bird and this write, John. Congratulations on your win! My bad for being so late. Still catching up with my reading of the winning writes.
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Date: 5/26/2015 11:06:00 PM
I truly enjoyed this elegant write and your accurate personification of the heron. Very nicely done, John! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 5/26/2015 12:35:00 PM
Hi John, I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for your heron poem. You brought him to live! Sandra
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Date: 5/24/2015 8:06:00 PM
John, congrats on your win with this fine portrayal of the heron! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:16:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your awesome Bird win @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/24/2015 6:08:00 AM
interesting poem, congratulations
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John Lawless
Date: 5/24/2015 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Shirley.
Date: 5/24/2015 4:27:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats John:-) Hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 5/24/2015 7:32:00 AM
Thanks again Jan, for your continuing support.
Date: 5/23/2015 11:14:00 PM
awesome...sk
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John Lawless
Date: 5/24/2015 7:31:00 AM
Thanks SKAT...
Date: 5/23/2015 9:02:00 PM
Beautiful poem, John , congratulations on your win hugs eve
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John Lawless
Date: 5/24/2015 7:31:00 AM
thank you Eve for stopping by to comment.
Date: 5/23/2015 8:43:00 PM
The language you used was mature and the poem meaningful, John. Congrats for your win.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/24/2015 7:29:00 AM
Another great contest Andrea, maybe the nest one could be about putting ourselves in the animals places and writing about what "they" think....Thanks for your time and effort and imagination with the contests.
Date: 5/21/2015 1:05:00 PM
Very nicely done.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/24/2015 7:27:00 AM
Thank you Michael,
Date: 5/16/2015 6:09:00 PM
This whole thing is great, but I especially love the way you worded that second stanza. Awesome job on this one and good luck in the contest.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/16/2015 10:26:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Peston and for reading and commenting.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/16/2015 10:26:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and for reading and commenting Preston
Date: 5/16/2015 6:00:00 PM
brilliantly penned John I love the personification - especially love the final line - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/17/2015 3:33:00 AM
Our friends have a fish pond it it netted like fort knox lol - heron's are so beautiful but have no worry over where they get their dinner lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 5/16/2015 10:25:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I see the heron most days when I fish and one pond has a rookery that is one cacophonous calamity at nesting time.

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