I Am the Earth

For the contest, Any Poem, sponsor, Broken Wings, written 12/2/2015




A primal inertia has held us together. 
I dream of a time when we collided,
when we danced together in a molten tango,
a violent waltz of heat and fury.
As our heavenly bodies fell into each other,
we shone a light into the darkest of worlds.

You governed my forces,
shaped all I was ever to be.
A gift of enduring stability,
a womb, a cradle,
a playground.

but now,
a heavy force,
a heavenly force,

a gravity,
that which pulls us ever further apart.
I have all the power of this world but still...
...still I can not hold you.
With every passing moment you grow more distant,
Your face, as I will always remember it, is frozen in time.

But still you shine on,
You give light to the dark of my night,
You give hope to the life that I hold.

You are my companion in time.

You are my distant love.

I am the earth,

and you,


you are the moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/26/2016 10:15:00 PM
GARY, Congratulations on your winning poem. XOX - LINDA -
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Gary Gene Linney
Date: 7/15/2016 5:32:00 PM
Thank you x
Date: 1/18/2016 8:57:00 AM
GARY GENE, Congrats on your any poem win. ** SKAT **
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Gary Gene Linney
Date: 1/19/2016 2:19:00 PM
Thank you very much skat!
Date: 1/17/2016 1:24:00 PM
Very beautiful, Gary! Written by an able hand! Congratulations on this fine win. // paul
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Gary Gene Linney
Date: 1/19/2016 2:18:00 PM
Thank you for your words, they are very much appreciated.
Date: 1/17/2016 9:03:00 AM
A lovely metaphorical write, Gary.
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Gary Gene Linney
Date: 1/19/2016 2:17:00 PM
Thank you for reading and for your kind reply.
Date: 1/16/2016 5:34:00 PM
such intense imagery Gary I really love the ending of the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gary Gene Linney
Date: 1/19/2016 2:16:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words x x
Date: 12/18/2015 11:00:00 AM
When looking for pure entertainment and sheer poetic expressions I come to your page. '...a womb, a cradle, a playground' and your culmination - I am the earth and you, you are the moon.' the extra '...and you, you' is a brilliant hesitation before 'you are the moon.' Superb my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Gary Gene Linney
Date: 12/18/2015 1:56:00 PM
I very much appreciate your kind words Keith, thank you?
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