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I Am That I Am Poetry Contest

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28/8/2026

I Am That I Am

Line of Inquiry
" a heartbeat pulsating a living light
free from each and every limitation
I Am that dwelling in unbound delight
the source wherefrom arises creation"



A bio about me, I’ll write down today
I’m an old aging woman, what more can I say?

But how did that happen, yesterday did I see
In the mirror a young girl, I’d swear she was me.

No wrinkles or crow’s feet, dark hair with no grey
But somehow has vanished, she was not there today.

Instead, just an old girl, who must have been she
So, I smiled at her broadly, and she smiled back at me.

But with age too comes wisdom, one gathers through life
 Don’t think I would swap it, I’m a grandmother, mum, wife.

Though my youth may have passed by, there’s so much I’ve gained
I’m content now with my lot, and all I ‘ve obtained.

My husband’s a winner; a good bloke is he
Though at times I might nag him, he lets me be me. 

My three children are my rocks, I can count on each one
To me they’re my diamonds, and they love their old mum.

My interests are varied, I read books, go to gym
Lift weights, and do push ups, just to keep myself trim.

I did have a good job, was nurse for some years
I’ve delivered a new babe, with joy through my tears.

For years I taught students, what a good nurse should be
Have compassion and caring, both things are the key.

And always treat fairly, the down and the out
Be never judgemental, of what they’re about.

I’m grateful for blessings, good fortunes received
A unique individual, from the first day I breathed.

So, when I now look back, I’ve naught to complain
And yes, if you asked me, I’d do just the same.
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September 11, 2026 at 4:24 AM
Christine, your lovely poem captures the essence of embracing life's journey with grace and gratitude. With its reflective tone and heartfelt message, it portrays the wisdom and fulfillment that come with age. You beautifully balance nostalgia with appreciation for the present, portraying familial love and personal achievements. Great Job
Onclaud Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 3:17 PM
such a pleasure knowing more of you, chris...lovely work ; i love how nurses care for others.
George Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 5:37 AM
So beautiful. While reading this I felt that you have given voice to my own thoughts. I too feel the same way as you felt on seeing the image that popped up in your mind on looking at the mirror. I too do not have many grievances, but am grateful for what I have got. I could so well relate to your stream of thoughts. A beautiful poem, dear Christine.
Watts Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 2:49 PM
Hi Valsa Many Thanks, yes no complaints from me I appreciate your support Cheers Chris
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 10:52 PM
What an engaging poem. Very personal and relatable. I like this a lot
Watts Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 2:45 PM
Hi Andrea Thank you , Thats me Cheers Chris
Poet Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 9:14 AM
Dear Christine, your wonderful poem beautifully captures the journey of life and aging with grace. It's heartfelt and relatable, weaving a tapestry of personal experience and wisdom. The reflective tone conveys a lovely acceptance of the past and gratitude for the present. It embraces the joys of family, the accomplishments of a fulfilling career, and the wisdom gained over time. It celebrates life with warmth and sincerity, reminding us to embrace each stage with gratitude and love.
Watts Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 12:24 AM
Hi Sotto Thank you so very much, I enjoy your comments for my poetry and yes, one must be thankful and a little wiser with each passing year Chers Christine
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