Eleza Young Poet Free verse

I Am Sorry For Leaving U

I am sorry for leaving u

cause we cant be together, 

i am sorry for leaving u, 

cause i want u to stride further, 

i am sorry for leaving u, 

cause if i don't, 

the world would start leaving u, 

i am sorry for leaving u, 

cause i don't want u to lose

which was so hard to achieve, 

i am sorry for leaving u, 

without a goodbye, 

cause i was afraid your tears might stop my try, 

i am happy to leave u, 

with others to take care, 

with a request to forget me as a nightmare

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Beata Agustin October 11, 2024 at 12:13 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 19, 2016 at 11:15 PM eleza, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 3:48 PM Eleza, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Mansur Aziz January 20, 2015 at 7:27 PM very nice poem, enjoyed very much

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri October 11, 2013 at 1:57 PM A nice poem! The jilting feel with a sacrificing tinge. Fine job! Do read my latest too

Richard Lamoureux August 27, 2013 at 7:14 AM Enjoyed reading again, congratulations.

Mansur Aziz July 24, 2013 at 1:34 PM the ending is very nice, congrats.

Shaz Cheesman July 21, 2013 at 1:40 AM Welcome to the Soup Asira....thanks for stopping by and reading a poem of mine too.....Shaz

Aseem Desai July 19, 2013 at 1:30 AM touching...intense emotions in very few words..i loved it..thanks

Donna Jones July 18, 2013 at 12:59 PM Very emotional poem....well done....

Anne-Lise Andresen July 18, 2013 at 11:55 AM - A sad goodbye ....... - however, you write well. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux July 18, 2013 at 10:01 AM Very sad, check the form it may be more of a free verse. The poem itself is very moving