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I Am Sorry For Leaving U

I am sorry for leaving u cause we cant be together, i am sorry for leaving u, cause i want u to stride further, i am sorry for leaving u, cause if i don't, the world would start leaving u, i am sorry for leaving u, cause i don't want u to lose which was so hard to achieve, i am sorry for leaving u, without a goodbye, cause i was afraid your tears might stop my try, i am happy to leave u, with others to take care, with a request to forget me as a nightmare

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/11/2024 12:13:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/19/2016 11:15:00 PM
eleza, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 3:48:00 PM
Eleza, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 1/20/2015 7:27:00 PM
very nice poem, enjoyed very much
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Date: 10/11/2013 1:57:00 PM
A nice poem! The jilting feel with a sacrificing tinge. Fine job! Do read my latest too
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Date: 8/27/2013 7:14:00 AM
Enjoyed reading again, congratulations.
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:34:00 PM
the ending is very nice, congrats.
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Date: 7/21/2013 1:40:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup Asira....thanks for stopping by and reading a poem of mine too.....Shaz
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Date: 7/19/2013 1:30:00 AM
touching...intense emotions in very few words..i loved it..thanks
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Date: 7/18/2013 12:59:00 PM
Very emotional poem....well done....
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Date: 7/18/2013 11:55:00 AM
- A sad goodbye ....... - however, you write well. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/18/2013 10:01:00 AM
Very sad, check the form it may be more of a free verse. The poem itself is very moving
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