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I Am So Cold

I can not be here no more I look and stare at the door Instead I do not see I feel so much anger Something inside crying My heartless controller Please do not follow I weep from my stolen sleep I can not eat This pain is driving my mind insaine Take these chains away I scream I scream no one knows I am dead in my soul Can you not feel I am so cold So cold So cold My pillow is the tear filled river This life makes me shiver I am starved of believing I am me let me be I AM ME ............................. I so cold I AM SO COLD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/7/2010 2:33:00 PM
I hope this is not a true feeling you have, but it is so real. Love Rog xx
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:29:00 PM
wow, powerfully written
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:03:00 AM
You realy are a beautiful poet... great expressions here, I got a chill just from reading....love Michael
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Date: 7/1/2010 4:34:00 PM
Screaming emotion from a cold cold place, a lovers warmth desiring embrace. A meadow, a stream on a patchwork quilt, for our tomorrow's we lie as our new life builds > wonderful poetry Sarah >> James
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Date: 6/30/2010 5:59:00 PM
this was very good. Good job sarah! I really enjoyed it.
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Date: 6/30/2010 5:21:00 PM
not such a nice feeling, still a wonderful poem, have anice one,..p.d.
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Date: 6/30/2010 5:01:00 PM
Great emotive and expressive write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/30/2010 4:58:00 PM
intesne write, have a good night!
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Date: 6/30/2010 4:51:00 PM
WOW, THIS IS SOME DEEP WRITE, VERY SADNESS IN YOUR CHARACTER. ENJOYED YOUR POEM-SKAT
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