Sarah Hales Poet I do not know?

I Am So Cold

I can not be here no more 
I look and stare at the door
Instead I do not see 
I feel so much anger
Something inside crying
My heartless controller
Please do not follow 
I weep from my stolen sleep
I can not eat 
This pain is driving my mind insaine
Take these chains away  
I scream I scream no one knows
I am dead in my soul
Can you not feel I am so cold
So cold 
So cold 
My pillow is the tear filled river
This life makes me shiver
I am starved of believing
I am me let me be I AM ME .............................
I so cold 
I AM SO COLD

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Roger Page July 7, 2010 at 2:33 PM I hope this is not a true feeling you have, but it is so real. Love Rog xx

Francine Roberts July 3, 2010 at 4:29 PM wow, powerfully written

Michael J. Falotico July 3, 2010 at 6:03 AM You realy are a beautiful poet... great expressions here, I got a chill just from reading....love Michael

James Fraser July 1, 2010 at 4:34 PM Screaming emotion from a cold cold place, a lovers warmth desiring embrace. A meadow, a stream on a patchwork quilt, for our tomorrow's we lie as our new life builds > wonderful poetry Sarah >> James

Sierra Cowan June 30, 2010 at 5:59 PM this was very good. Good job sarah! I really enjoyed it.

Poet Destroyer A June 30, 2010 at 5:21 PM not such a nice feeling, still a wonderful poem, have anice one,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick June 30, 2010 at 5:01 PM Great emotive and expressive write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Doris Culverhouse June 30, 2010 at 4:58 PM intesne write, have a good night!

Skat A June 30, 2010 at 4:51 PM WOW, THIS IS SOME DEEP WRITE, VERY SADNESS IN YOUR CHARACTER. ENJOYED YOUR POEM-SKAT