I Am Shootinq Star

fly 
dreams unreachable
as far as an airplane's window could never see
could never see me
imagine gravity
holdinq me back once more
setting fire the door
once more
oh that curiousity may let me sing
please, fear, go away
from my window
so this air can caress another and bother me no more
i am shootinq star.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 25, 2010 at 3:51 PM
wonderful... friend! shooting stars are rare and real... please check the forms of poetry on Poetry Soup so as to avoid, "I Don't Know" I guess this is a free verse. would like to say welcome to the Soup, keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your passion and pride... you will find a lot of encouragements here... keep up the great work. Love always, Adeleke
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August 25, 2010 at 5:19 AM
I am happy your poetry was among the poetry I had a chance to read today Chante. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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