I Am She, She Is Mine

if she ever smiled,
cracks would show,
if perfection existed
she wouldn't know,

listen to her cries-
the way they sound like singing,
listen to her lies-
the way they it feels like living,

if she ever left
the world would split in two;
standing, on nothing but a raft,
she'll show up when you're blue

but you let her go-
now you're on your own
by then you'll cry,
and she won't show.

teeth fall but at least you're there;
when the skyes open up
the ocean won't be fair,
but she won't stop

looking to be first
not in their vocabulary-
oh! but she'll burst
and you might worry

that she won't make it-
until you see
the moon's well lit
while the air will be your fee

and when it hurts
the sea won't care,
and when it burns
she'll cut her hair-

for she's the stars, the moon and the sky-
and im hers, until i die.
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Date: 10/8/2023 9:36:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/7/2023 1:05:00 PM
A wonderful mad crazy beautiful poem, full of touch and feel and sensation. i really enjoyed reading this. lovexx
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Jordana Arias
Date: 10/7/2023 1:12:00 PM
thank you so much, janine, am very glad to hear you enjoyed it:).
Date: 10/6/2023 9:51:00 PM
That last line! Touching! So well written . Felt that
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Jordana Arias
Date: 10/7/2023 1:14:00 PM
thank you! it's my favorite line as well:).
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