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I Am She, She Is Mine

if she ever smiled, cracks would show, if perfection existed she wouldn't know, listen to her cries- the way they sound like singing, listen to her lies- the way they it feels like living, if she ever left the world would split in two; standing, on nothing but a raft, she'll show up when you're blue but you let her go- now you're on your own by then you'll cry, and she won't show. teeth fall but at least you're there; when the skyes open up the ocean won't be fair, but she won't stop looking to be first not in their vocabulary- oh! but she'll burst and you might worry that she won't make it- until you see the moon's well lit while the air will be your fee and when it hurts the sea won't care, and when it burns she'll cut her hair- for she's the stars, the moon and the sky- and im hers, until i die.

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Date: 10/8/2023 9:36:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/7/2023 1:05:00 PM
A wonderful mad crazy beautiful poem, full of touch and feel and sensation. i really enjoyed reading this. lovexx
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Jordana Arias
Date: 10/7/2023 1:12:00 PM
thank you so much, janine, am very glad to hear you enjoyed it:).
Date: 10/6/2023 9:51:00 PM
That last line! Touching! So well written . Felt that
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Jordana Arias
Date: 10/7/2023 1:14:00 PM
thank you! it's my favorite line as well:).

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