I am Sadness

coked with deep depression, in prayer alone, I’m stuck in this body feverish and weak in their chair they mope, though everybody around doesn’t seem too much care 8/18/2024

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Silent One

Date: 8/19/2024 1:15:00 PM

I can feel the sadness in your personification and this one is excellent meter..

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/19/2024 10:39:00 AM

Your "I Am Sadness" is a powerful write. I see more sadness today than ever before. I think it is because of the crazy world. Do Not Be Sad, Be Happy....Hooray!!!! Hugs... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away............

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/19/2024 5:52:00 AM

Dear Eve, I liked how you personified Sadness and yes not many people care to at least have sadness. Well inked and well said! - Blessings, MY Dear Friend, Daniel