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I Am Part One

I am the wind beneath the sparrows wings as it heavenly sings. I am the single rose sitting in a barren land. I am the the lions voice, and the partridge voice as they rejoice. I am the beam of light penetrating the vastness of the worlds darkness. The secret power is no secret,the secret power is me. I am the secret power revealed and concealed in greatness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/22/2012 7:55:00 AM
Very powerful and beautiful verses of who you are Elliott.. going to read part 2
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Date: 4/21/2012 11:30:00 PM
Stunning piece Elliott, love the elements you used in this one! Off to read no2
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Date: 4/21/2012 11:57:00 AM
Good Elliott....... I will read next part.. - Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/20/2012 12:07:00 PM
We all have the power within and I like this uplifting write. love phyl
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Date: 4/19/2012 6:47:00 PM
Wow, you are one poetic voice.. I love the power, you find within yourself.. Elliott, keep that greatness fresh in everyway...always..PD
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Date: 4/19/2012 4:49:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your spirit lifting work...Sara
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Date: 4/19/2012 4:34:00 PM
Extend this, add a beat and I see a hit. As a poem it is great all the same and I rather enjoyed it.. Good work!!..:JP]
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