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I Am Nothing

I am nothing but a plain pen in the hands of the Great King A simple sparrow, singled out solely to solemnly sing... from the rising of the rainbow, to the release of the rainfall ring; from the setting of the sun and the springing of seeds in Spring

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Ingibo Benson

Date: 6/22/2011 9:00:00 PM

A poem of truth. Nice write.

Ingibo Benson

Date: 6/22/2011 8:52:00 PM

So much truth, "I Am Nothing" relates. Love this poem too.

Louis Rams

Date: 3/8/2011 7:15:00 AM

you have been used as gods tool, and his words you write will forever rule.

Crista Gorman

Date: 3/7/2011 12:12:00 PM

What a lovely picture your words impress on my mind, thank you Adeleke.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2011 11:24:00 PM

Adeleke, I really like this. I'ts quite wonderful in its simplicity. I see below here that you got upset over the prodigal remark? Deb is right though, in our culture it only means someone absent from a whlie. WE do not attach a negative meaning to that. LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/12/2011 5:46:00 AM

sorry if the "prodigal" term upset you I'm apparently not up enough on my biblical reffernces, in the Ma mind it only meant the son who left his Ma's is coming home. BIG HUGS

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/10/2011 1:07:00 PM

good I liked it ,, thank you for letting me read ;} Debbie,,,,,,,,,,,

Eamon Duffin

Date: 2/10/2011 9:52:00 AM

Hi Adeleke. Thanks for the visit and your kind comments. I seem to have little time lately but hope that this will change. what a great piece this. Makes one think about why we rush and tear about. We are designated a task in life and come what may, we will fullfill. Have a peaceful and joyous time and keep writing those fine works. farewell from Ireland and me.

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 12/31/2010 8:41:00 PM

So glad I read this, this evening.... well done!May the seeds grow, May you have a blessed new year, Cindy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/29/2010 8:07:00 AM

Inspiring and thought provoking write in these days, Adeleke