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I Am Not a Moron

Now, When I turn back
I realize
The depth of my love for you.
It was easy to bid bye
But it’s difficult to endure with a sigh

Memories pile up old and crypt
The moments we shared
The giggles we made
The puerile fights we had
Then again, you came to console!

I was oblivious of my mistake
When I confessed my love
And the price I had to pay
Was nothing but our kinship!

I was a clown
With big red lips and white cheeks
And a big red nose
Masking the feelings
All went in vein at last
Alas! Am I a moron?!

Nothing but love knows
And love alone knows
Its pain and fain!
I am content
Not to lose you for
Not telling my love
I am glad, I am not a moron!

Now, When I turn back
I realize
The depth of my love for you.
It was easy to bid bye
But it’s difficult to endure with a sigh!!!

-17/09/2015-
featured in PS on 25/10/2015

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/28/2019 7:17:00 AM A tremendous first offering to the soup. You have been a member for a long time. Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 8/28/2019 9:27:00 AM Yes, I have been. But, now a days I don't find much time to spend. But i have dedicated my first published book, a compilation of a few poems, titled 'Remnants of some silly experiences' to Poetry Soup. Thanks for the love and encouragement.

Muhammad Imtiaz Date: 3/9/2018 6:37:00 PM hi Punnia it is a wonderful expression of Love, truly love is higher than stupidness "I am content Not to lose you for Not telling my love I am glad, I am not a moron! " Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 3/10/2018 3:15:00 AM Thanks Muhammad for the lovely comment...god bless..

Jannie Breedt Date: 12/11/2016 5:53:00 PM Hi Punnia, do they have heartbreaks in India too? Just joking. Its something that becomes the remnants of silly decisions, I suppose? Jannie Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 12/16/2016 1:02:00 AM you said it right jannie. thank you for your time and love. i shall read your poems soon. right now i am a bit tied up with work. love and peace

Liam Mcdaid Date: 12/28/2015 7:27:00 PM wow now that poem hit a deep chord excellent piece i know that feeling beautifully painted Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 12/28/2015 8:42:00 PM you know the feeling??!! same pinch then, lol ;) thank you for the wonderful comment and your time :)) God bless..take care.. gonna read your page soon

Paul Callus Date: 12/1/2015 4:53:00 PM I have enjoyed this poem, Punnia. In life some things are not meant to be! Of course, we just can't sweep things under the carpet as if they never happened...memories will return from time to time. Regards // paul Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 12/1/2015 8:53:00 PM Glad that you enjoyed this poem :)) Thank you so much for the visit and your time to leave a sweet comment..and yeah, thanks a lot for getting my name correct ;) God bless. love and peace <3

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/10/2015 9:09:00 PM You can not be the moron, you see, thats my job!!!! Loved the poem! :) Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 11/10/2015 11:59:00 PM hahahaha...thank you arthur :) Love and peace

Abdiel Rios Date: 10/30/2015 11:46:00 AM Good poem keep it up :) Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/30/2015 11:50:00 AM Thank you abdiel..love and peace :)

Kp Nunez Date: 9/30/2015 8:47:00 PM Hi Punnia. Sadness brought out the muse and gave you this heartfelt write. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Keep writing, keep posting and continue reading and commenting. There are plenty of friendly and kind-hearted poets here. Thank you for your visit and hope to talk with you again soon. hugs! Kim :-))) Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/1/2015 8:58:00 AM Thank you Kim :)) :* hugs :)

James Inman Date: 9/25/2015 11:23:00 AM Lovely poem, Punnia. Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 9/26/2015 11:29:00 AM thank you James :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/19/2015 7:22:00 PM Hi Punnia, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 9/26/2015 11:30:00 AM Thank you so much for the warm welcome dear :) Love and peace to you LINDA :) <3

Skat A Date: 9/18/2015 11:10:00 AM Punnia, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 9/26/2015 11:37:00 AM Aww...I love that intro "nice poet" :) Thank you sweets for the sweet welcome <3 I am from the beautiful city of Kozhikode (will be difficult to pronounce, so juz call it calicut ;) ) in Kerala, India. As a person I am kind-hearted person, but when angry really annoying ;) I love simple and small things as the quoting goes "Small things are beautiful", say small gestures of love and happiness, simple plain smileyss... :) :) <3 And that hugs mean a lot to me...love, peace and hugs to you SKAT <3 :*