L Milton Hankins Poet Free verse

I Am Mesmerized

I am mesmerized
by ever-changing wisps
of clouds
meandering across
cobalt-blue
Hawaiian skies.
I am mesmerized
by whitecaps dashing
against coral breakers
phizzing out in the sand.
I am mesmerized
by colorful phrases
strolling across white
unlined pages.

written September 11, 2021

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Terry Miller September 13, 2021 at 2:21 AM This is a great write!

Caren Krutsinger September 12, 2021 at 12:46 PM I am mesmerized by all of this and more! I wish I had thought of these words Hank. Congratulations. A fave. L Milton Hankins September 12, 2021 at 5:42 PM Well, you can borrow them and expand on them from your own thoughts. I, too, could probably write pages of things that really interest and/or astound me.

Gershon Wolf September 11, 2021 at 8:24 PM Nicely done, maestro! Keep turning the pages! Happiness always, Milt. :) gw L Milton Hankins September 11, 2021 at 9:17 PM Thanks for the encouragement, gw. I shall.

Shirley Hawkins September 11, 2021 at 7:10 PM We are very lucky to have the ability to appreciate all the wonders of nature. I too am mesmerized. I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. L Milton Hankins September 11, 2021 at 7:36 PM Thank you, Shirley, for reading my poem and for your lovely remarks. You always write such encouraging things...in comments and in your poems. Have a wonderful upcoming week.