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I Am Mesmerized

I am mesmerized by ever-changing wisps of clouds meandering across cobalt-blue Hawaiian skies. I am mesmerized by whitecaps dashing against coral breakers phizzing out in the sand. I am mesmerized by colorful phrases strolling across white unlined pages. written September 11, 2021

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Terry Miller

Date: 9/13/2021 2:21:00 AM

This is a great write!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/12/2021 12:46:00 PM

I am mesmerized by all of this and more! I wish I had thought of these words Hank. Congratulations. A fave.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/12/2021 5:42:00 PM

Well, you can borrow them and expand on them from your own thoughts. I, too, could probably write pages of things that really interest and/or astound me.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/11/2021 8:24:00 PM

Nicely done, maestro! Keep turning the pages! Happiness always, Milt. :) gw

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/11/2021 9:17:00 PM

Thanks for the encouragement, gw. I shall.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 9/11/2021 7:10:00 PM

We are very lucky to have the ability to appreciate all the wonders of nature. I too am mesmerized. I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/11/2021 7:36:00 PM

Thank you, Shirley, for reading my poem and for your lovely remarks. You always write such encouraging things...in comments and in your poems. Have a wonderful upcoming week.