I Am Me

I am me I dont need these clothes this hair these shoes to define me I dont need your words your comments your opinions to describe me I dont want my region or education or religion to identify me I am me Take away my fancies all the silver all thr gold Take away my friends all these buildings all my books Take away my diamonds all my riches all my wealth I'll still be me Give me the drums the rhythm the dance give me the music the mask the claps give me my home my people my tradition Thats wat defines me My homeland Africa

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2016 4:51:00 PM

nice to see you again

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2016 4:36:00 PM

Nice Danitta, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/4/2016 2:00:00 PM

hope to see you back this year 2016

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/13/2014 4:45:00 PM

Hi Danitta, yours fits the poem about you, is awesome... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2014 3:40:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Danitta- I choose your first lovely written poem - hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2014 11:18:00 PM

LOVE this one. So good to see how you write. A FAVE.

Skat A

Date: 1/30/2014 8:06:00 PM

Danitta, wow... I love this I AM ME" poem... You truly gave it to us straight. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT