Notes About The Poem

Collage by Suzanne Delaney

I combined another challenge with this to write to a set of words

Dance, crystals, bathing, breath, crisp, vein, clutch, drain, threads fluid. 

I was born in Tasmania. Our ancesters were Irish and were possibly descended from convicts.  I was placed in a Salvation Army Home from aged 7 yrs until I was 9 years old.

The large bay windows overlooked a garden with Agapanthus and I often sat there in the warm sun when I felt sad.

The essence of this poem is about how these things shaped me

 

 

I Am Made of This

 I am from those moments
George Ella Lyon

I am Made of This

I am from the isolation of pioneer spirits-
an ancient beekeeper- a vintage lacemaker

I am from a land of dancing brolgas -
and Rainbow Serpents

I am from agapanthus and flyblown windows-
I am from sunlight bathing shadows
the fluid drain of time- crisp July mornings

I am from the veins in leaves - 
butterfly wings

I am from the sudden clutch-
of sad departings

I am from threadbare curtains-
the crystal charity of others

I am from pure grief-
all this
and the breath of stolen  dreams


written  5/10/2009

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101 in a ROW contest -4
Contest Judged:  7/27/2016 9:30:00 PM
Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A 
6th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kimathi Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 2:14 AM
What a deep, emotional verse.... Congrats Suzanne, for having your piece placed in the contest!!! ;-)
Richards Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 10:08 AM
This is a wonderful bio, of sorts, Suzanne! So much to read between the lines, that tells us more about you. I feel the strength of a survivor, a beautiful soul, and a wise and creative woman. Well done! :) Hugs!
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July 13, 2016 at 12:59 AM
hello Suz, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for the support. Stop by and enjoy the sanity of my newest Blog "In Red's Silent Fury." Always & Forever WUV ~LINDA~
Mcdaid Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:25 AM
truly excellent pen suzanne
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 4:53 AM
- A great bio poem, a joy to read Suzanne ! - Congratulations on your wonderful 3rd place in the bio contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Delaney Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 10:46 PM
Thanks Anne Lise: You have been a friend from the start. Stopping by soon for a read. Hugs, SuZ
Callus Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 3:28 PM
You are made of beautiful things, Suzanne; this is not just a bio, but a real poem as well. Well done...and congrats on a lovely win. // paul ....a 7 rating, not just for the bio, but for the poem!!! // paul
Delaney Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 10:45 PM
Thanks Paul: Your rating and comment is highly valued from a writer of your caliber. SuZ
Richards Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 3:14 PM
This is gorgeous........ I would rate it a #1 poem!!
Delaney Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 10:43 PM
Thanks Carrie...always a joy to hear from you.
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 2:38 PM
Stunning bio Suzanne - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
Delaney Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 8:44 PM
Thanks Jan: I appreciate you stopping by. Hugs, SuZ
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 11:27 PM
Seeing another familiar bio and it's stunning as ever. Congrats, sweetie.
Delaney Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 8:45 PM
Thanks Andrea: I wanted to upload a collage I made of this poem but haven't worked out how to add a picture yet.
Anglesey Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 11:13 PM
Stunning ! Congrats on the win :)
The Gypsy King Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 4:41 PM
Two thumbs up Thanks for sharing
Guzzi Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 6:12 PM
Congrad's on your win. Happy Christmas Eve. Light & Love
Lamoureux Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 4:35 PM
Well done SuZ congratulations.
Oyewole Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 8:21 AM
Big congrats to you on your winning poem.
Mehta Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 12:14 AM
Enjoyed your beautiful write on a portrait of a poet and congratulations on the win, SuZ
May Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 1:04 PM
congrats on a fine win
Phookan Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 12:57 PM
Congrats Suzanne on your wonderful win! This I found very subtle, very beautifully done! Thanks for your participation. huggs...G
Jones Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 5:48 PM
Congratulations on your win...
A   Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 6:40 PM
Suzanne , :-) congratulations with your awesome "SELF PORTRAIT" poem. Take Care ~ PD
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April 16, 2013 at 8:49 PM
Dear P,S-N, SUZ, Since my last comment on YOUR POETRY I have been rummaging through the dictionary,thesaurus(spelling), POEMS of the Masters ( I thought I saw YOUR POEMS there) trying to find words to describe YOUR Elegance.YOU do POETRY an Honor just touching YOUR Quill. I am sorry I am uneducated in the English Language.It probably sounds like I am Perfuming my comments to gain YOUR respect.My words are from my Heart.I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 11:37 AM
Wonderful written Suzanne, thank you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Delaney Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Thanks Anne Lise It is for the Self Portrait Challenge. SuZ
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 8:02 PM
this is fantastic, I love best of all your free verse.soupmail.
Delaney Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 8:49 PM
Thanks Andrea: Good to see you. Love, SuZ
Richards Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 7:35 PM
This is soo soo good, Suzanne! Heartwrenching and yet beautifully worded.
Delaney Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 7:55 PM
thanks, Carrie: I entered it in the Self Portrait contest. I hope its not too abstract....
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