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Relaxed and warm I'm feeling under this warm blanket, I can sleep out from the cold. Sometimes I wonder if others are so lucky, I guess many don't, then I get upset about my luck. A hurting winter is here. I wish it didn't hurt so much for the ones that don't have a blanket to sleep under. I wish the snow fell everywhere to fill dry fountains, to keep happy every child making angels on the snow. Lara I am, a humble dog with big wishes in this difficoult times. I don't play a balalaika, but I can play the sound of every mind when is knocked down or when is above the moon. I am Lara, a dog that feels every second of your life, I am the one that I am, always there for you.

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Date: 11/26/2023 3:37:00 PM
I loved hearing about Lara, a humble dog whom you've beautifully personified in your poem. She's a lucky pooch being inside although she wonders about those who aren't as fortunate as her. I love the sentiments you expressed through your words. Well done, Maria. I liked it! Have a splendid week, Sara
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/27/2023 1:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara for your kind words. Lara is very nice little dog, she loves cheese as mice...anyway, she's our baby. Have a wonderful week Saraxxx
Date: 11/25/2023 6:52:00 PM
A truly magnificent poem, profound and evocative, crafted with utmost ingenuity. The intricate tapestry of sentiments is masterfully entwined. A splendid benevolent sentiment resonates for the needy souls bereft of a comforting coverlet. Your portrayal of vivid imagery displays unrivaled brilliance, artfully arranged with utmost finesse.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/25/2023 7:34:00 PM
Thank you Sotto. I really appreciate your brilliant comment.xxx

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