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I Am In Virginia

I sit on the balcony legs swinging, with a friend hoping this summer will never end I feel the country breeze on my face Hearing many sounds, that leave no trace looking down on uncle Jim's farm the fields are endless the sun is so warm, the fireflys twinkle like stars, and swarm the river runs wildly, waterfall foams idly dad fell on a slippery rock, spashing by me.. The rain, pitter patters, frogs on the pond, splatter a drip, droppity song

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Date: 3/6/2010 5:22:00 PM
Wonderful rhyme. The sounds just roll of the toungue. Much brighter than your other poems, but then again life is both up and down. I find it easier to pen the sad because it helps me cope. Thanks for you comments on my poem. Happy Writing!
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Date: 2/24/2010 5:56:00 PM
It i wonderful to be in the place that fits your peaceful mind. thank you for the comment. keep writing! -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 1/26/2010 5:29:00 AM
Wonderful! Sounds like you enjoyed the time. This is very descriptive, painting a happy, contented picture. :)
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Date: 1/7/2010 8:42:00 PM
Lots of great imagery here, Lea. I like this poem alot! Andrea
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Date: 1/7/2010 8:05:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. may your stay here be a long one.. and may your new year be filled with blessings..luv.. creativeness.. friendships.. and great poetry as this delightful one.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...
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