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I Am In a Pond

I am in a Pond I am in a pond as a muddy water Nothing is visible and clear to my vision Though it is a bright day, every thing is dark and glare to my eyes I have failed to reach my ocean and failed to make my self as a dry land I became a cursed hallow pit and my thoughts are still revolving that pit Though there are many gutters from rivers Still I am a nasty dirt pit Nothing has come to have a water for it’s thirst Cause I am a waste waterless pond All my booms have turned as curse I am still in that pond as a muddy water Nothing is visible and clear to my vision Though there are many lives are crossing I am still kept as isolated pond I don’t have any green memory to recollect from the past to present I am there in [that pond as a muddy water]

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Date: 9/6/2009 1:44:00 PM
What a beautiful day and what splendid poetry I am reading. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors Sakthee. Love, Carol
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