I Am In a Pond

I am in a Pond

 

I am in a pond as a muddy water

Nothing is visible and clear to my vision

Though it is a bright day,

every thing is dark and glare to my eyes

I have failed to reach my ocean and

failed to make my self as a dry land

I became a cursed hallow pit and

my thoughts are still revolving that pit

Though there are many gutters from rivers

Still I  am a nasty dirt pit

Nothing has come to have a water for it’s thirst

Cause I am a waste waterless pond

All my booms  have turned as curse

I am still in that pond as a muddy water

Nothing is visible and clear to my vision

Though there are many lives are crossing

I am still kept as isolated pond

I don’t have any green memory to recollect

from the past to present  I am there in

                [that pond as a  muddy water]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 6, 2009 at 1:44 PM
What a beautiful day and what splendid poetry I am reading. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors Sakthee. Love, Carol
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