Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

I Am In a Pickle With You

Here we sit all cold and wet,                                                                                          please do not start to fret.                                                                                                  Let me snuggle up to you,                                                                                                  I promise not to chew.                                                                                                          I think these new glass jars,                                                                                                really came in a box from mars.                                                                                          Some say this stinky pickle juice,                                                                                        tastes like it came from a big moose.                                                                                  I don't care if you're sweet or dill,                                                                                        you will always be my thrill.                                                                                                  We both may be green,                                                                                                      so we can't help our jeans.                                                                                                  I will love you until the end,                                                                                                you will always be my best friend.                                                                                      Guess we can't get out of this pickle we are in,                                                                  so let's just say amen.

(Two talking pickles stuck in a jar.)
Written Date: 2/16/2020

3 Place     STRAND CHOICE Z, any form, any theme Contest Judged:4/4/2020 sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Lindsay Laurie May 30, 2020 at 8:25 PM Hello Paula … a fun write indeed. Some of us can find ourselves in a pickle jar at times but the juice might be different - thank you Paula - Lindsay Paula Goldsmith June 1, 2020 at 2:11 PM Thanks for reading and writing. Yes, was can get into a pickle jar. Guess that is life. Enjoy your day............

Sam Kauffman April 5, 2020 at 11:19 AM So much fun Paula! Congratulations on "being in a pickle." Paula Goldsmith April 5, 2020 at 4:59 PM Thank You, for your note and congratulations. Glad you like. Guess I am now a pickle. Have a wonderful day.......

Jenish Somadas February 19, 2020 at 10:35 PM lol.. Beautifully done.. You have a splendid imagination... Great entry in the contest Paula.. Good luck.. Paula Goldsmith February 20, 2020 at 11:31 AM "Thank You," for your note and good luck. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful writing..........

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2020 at 6:04 PM this is very cute. She likes funny ones and this one had some clever little jokes in it. Paula Goldsmith February 19, 2020 at 11:45 AM Thank You for your note. Glad you like it. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day.................

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2020 at 1:15 PM - A winning poem, Paula ... you did so well - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2020 at 4:01 PM So glad you like it and think it is a winner. I sure hope so. It was fun to write. Hugs Back & Have A Great Day.................

Ralph Sergi February 17, 2020 at 8:41 AM Love of a pickle. Well done! Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2020 at 3:59 PM "Thank You," for reading and writing. Glad you like it. I also love pickles. I now may look at them a little different after this write. Have a wonderful day.............