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I Am Hut

I'm hut. In Ancient, I was the perfect Breeded by palms cut. In my belly everyone liveth When the villains wants to hurt But now unlike then, I'm left with folks Wisdom came to my people to make a difference Little of their sweet talk I was belittled,so helpless I am your HOME, your SHIELD, everyone care less. Though I could lost the best but know i'm the first What am I to you? That's the only question I'd left Is it just a drawn triangle on a square box length? Let the world know I am this!! written in concrete Yea, I am the Hut, I was left alone, I am well hurt.

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Date: 5/3/2019 8:39:00 AM
Nice write up dear May God continue to add to your knowledge Am really impressed
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Precious Adebanke
Date: 5/3/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 5/3/2019 8:05:00 AM
This is beautifully written down...kudos!
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Precious Adebanke
Date: 5/3/2019 8:50:00 AM
Nothing without God and your support
Date: 5/3/2019 5:45:00 AM
I am hut was my first concrete poem, I would do better next time...
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Kenny Daniel
Date: 5/3/2019 8:00:00 AM
You're real doing great...best poet I've ever met!

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