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I Am Hut

I'm hut. 
                                 In Ancient, 
                             I was the perfect 
                          Breeded by palms cut.
                      In my belly everyone liveth
                   When the villains wants to hurt
               But now unlike then, I'm left with folks 
     Wisdom came to my people to make a difference 

     Little of their sweet talk I was belittled,so helpless

     I am your HOME, your SHIELD, everyone care less.

    Though I could lost the best but know i'm the first

    What am I to you? That's the only question I'd left

    Is it just a drawn triangle on a square box length? 

    Let the world know I am this!! written in concrete

    Yea, I am the Hut, I was left alone, I am well  hurt.

Copyright © Precious Adebanke | Year Posted 2019

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Date: 5/3/2019 8:39:00 AM Nice write up dear May God continue to add to your knowledge Am really impressed Login to Reply Precious Adebanke Date: 5/3/2019 8:49:00 AM Thank you very much

Kenny Daniel Date: 5/3/2019 8:05:00 AM This is beautifully written down...kudos! Login to Reply Precious Adebanke Date: 5/3/2019 8:50:00 AM Nothing without God and your support

Precious Adebanke Date: 5/3/2019 5:45:00 AM I am hut was my first concrete poem, I would do better next time... Login to Reply Kenny Daniel Date: 5/3/2019 8:00:00 AM You're real doing great...best poet I've ever met!