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I am envious on my partner

I am envious Albeit you stay by me, You are dark While the sun shines, You laugh at me When I am delight, You cry with me Without knowing my pain... You can climb trees But I can't, You can dance with me, But you won't feel dizzy... You will be happy If I get applause.... You will hide behind me If I get scolded, I will strain hard to seek permission .. But you will accompany me As you are granted..... Every day I try hard, Without efforts you Dwell with me, You won't ever get scolded You won't ever have feelings You won't ever have pain Still you stay with me On the daylight ... You leave me alone In the deadly darkness... I feel my pain You reel my pain, I am envious Albeit you are my shadow...

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Date: 7/3/2020 10:16:00 PM
So much fun! Welcome to Soup.
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S S Beulin
Date: 7/4/2020 8:04:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 6/26/2020 7:49:00 AM
Cleverly expressed. This piece deserves far more attention than it has recieved, it is very good.
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S S Beulin
Date: 6/26/2020 11:04:00 AM
Thank you very much... Your comment encourages me. :)
Date: 6/21/2020 5:59:00 AM
wow.. this is brilliant.. love the analogy of the shadow... It goes away in darkness though.. I mentioned the shadow in my poem today also, what a coincidence..
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S S Beulin
Date: 6/21/2020 11:50:00 AM
I so glad to read your comment... I read your poem just now .... Yeah yeah it's really coincidence