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I Am Eagle

I welcome the rising sun from the comfort of my aerie, Surveying my domain - the mountains, streams and verdant prairie! I preen my feathers and flex my wings for another day of flight, Soaring o'er God's vast creation cherishing everything in sight! Ah! To behold the ever-changing panorama unfolding 'neath my wings! Ye mere mortals can only dream of the magnificence of such things! Shimmering lakes (from which later for lunch I'll snag a trout)! Below, herds of bison and groups of deer with fawns gamboling about! Heard are dulcet hymns of water rushing o'er stones in meandering streams. Distant snow-capped mountains glistening in the sun's radiant beams! I settle atop a Colorado spruce to rest and muse upon my situation; I'm so honored to have been selected as the emblem of this great nation! With the people of this land, I share vigor and farsighted vision. Even with its flaws, democracy will be sustained - this is what I envision! I take time to gaze at the grandeur of the sun settling in the west, Another glorious mural by the Master Artist so beautifully expressed! I soar on gentle breezes back to my aerie atop the mountain tor, And fold my wings and dream of soaring to greater heights once more! Won lst Place in PoetrySoup Contest - Jul 2020

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Date: 8/4/2020 3:36:00 PM
Good to see the eagle soaring high on the winners' list. Congrats to you, Robert.
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Date: 8/2/2020 12:16:00 PM
You Made me smile with the trout line, lovely description Bob, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/2/2020 9:29:00 AM
Robert, great personification and descriptive imagery. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/2/2020 4:02:00 AM
Your poem gives the perfect picture of a grand, gracious, elegant eagle Robert. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/2/2020 1:15:00 AM
Back with Kudos and Champagne.. Knew you would win The Pangie
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/2/2020 6:23:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie - I'll drink to that! Bob H
Date: 8/1/2020 2:47:00 PM
Robert, this is a beautiful, descriptive, delightful, patriotic, WINNING poem! Janice
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Date: 8/1/2020 12:38:00 PM
Robert, congratulations on your first place win, I really enjoyed this gem!
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/1/2020 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Tania! I'm honored that you considered the poem worthy of a win, lst Place no less! I look forward to participating in other contests you may sponsor - Bob H
Date: 7/18/2020 9:31:00 PM
Well written Bob, you'll Soar high with this one. Tom
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/19/2020 8:57:00 AM
Thank you, Tom: Have never tried a Personification before - challenging to pull together. Enjoy your day and be glad in it! - Bob
Date: 7/18/2020 9:15:00 PM
Hello Bob ... such a majestic bird and so graceful in the sky. Our eagle may be different but its attributes are similar. I can only imagine how beautiful the world must look from an eagle's eye - thank you Bob - Lindsay
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/19/2020 9:01:00 AM
Howdy, Lindsay: Glad you enjoyed. Beautiful eagles soar over beautiful Colorado by the flocks. So majestic! I enjoy watching programs about the flora and fauna of Australia. If I had to choose another country to live, it would be there. Take great care - Bob
Date: 7/18/2020 5:07:00 PM
Robert~ - stunning write. Very Beatiful. Sure to be a winner in Tania's contest. Panagiota
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