I Am Done

I am done being your puppet
I am done fulfilling your wishes
I am done living your life
I am done being you
Living to throat clenching social conformities
The unbearable heat of me supposed to know this and that
I am done admiring you
I am done thinking that you are better
I am done walking on your footsteps
Mobbing up my pain with tears to please you
I am done you building me like Lego
I am walking once again with my feet
Once again I breathe for the first time
The fresh air of freedom like lilies -beautiful
For this is the last time I live you

I am done
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 9:41 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 7:29 PM
Daniel, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 10:34 PM
DANIEL, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
Kuria Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 5:30 AM
Thanks for the support guys.
Muitherero Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 2:07 AM
Let's call this one 'The freedom creed'.Really really nice!
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