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I Am Done

I am done being your puppet I am done fulfilling your wishes I am done living your life I am done being you Living to throat clenching social conformities The unbearable heat of me supposed to know this and that I am done admiring you I am done thinking that you are better I am done walking on your footsteps Mobbing up my pain with tears to please you I am done you building me like Lego I am walking once again with my feet Once again I breathe for the first time The fresh air of freedom like lilies -beautiful For this is the last time I live you I am done

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Date: 2/24/2016 7:29:00 PM
Daniel, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 10:34:00 PM
DANIEL, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 1/16/2014 5:30:00 AM
Thanks for the support guys.
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Date: 1/15/2014 2:07:00 AM
Let's call this one 'The freedom creed'.Really really nice!
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