I Am Done

I am done being your puppet I am done fulfilling your wishes I am done living your life I am done being you Living to throat clenching social conformities The unbearable heat of me supposed to know this and that I am done admiring you I am done thinking that you are better I am done walking on your footsteps Mobbing up my pain with tears to please you I am done you building me like Lego I am walking once again with my feet Once again I breathe for the first time The fresh air of freedom like lilies -beautiful For this is the last time I live you I am done

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/25/2024 9:41:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2016 7:29:00 PM

Daniel, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/3/2016 10:34:00 PM

DANIEL, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**

Daniel Kuria

Date: 1/16/2014 5:30:00 AM

Thanks for the support guys.

Kennedy Muitherero

Date: 1/15/2014 2:07:00 AM

Let's call this one 'The freedom creed'.Really really nice!