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I Am Desolation

Set me off. I dare you. I want you to feel my rage. Taste my vindictiveness. And swallow the bullets I've bled out from. You made me like this.. Unsure, worthless, uncared for. Look at yourself. I hope your rotting heart flourishes throughout the physical beauty you obtain and charcoals it like it should be. You write a cannonade. Hurling daggers into everything lively in me. Ripping and tearing my being into shrivel pieces. Flinging my dead body across yours as a shield of your own self destruction. Damn, you make me sick. I'm eternally "thankful" to you. For turning me into something I never imagined. I am desolation.

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Skat A

Date: 10/18/2016 11:21:00 PM

A*ALFONSO, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/18/2016 9:54:00 PM

A*Ashley, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/16/2016 5:10:00 AM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath.........