I am Death

Life, you are an illusion, a trick that convinces people they own what they only borrow.

You fool them into believing they can gain more, build more, become more, as if any of it follows them past the edge.

Even those who stack riches high enough to block the sun still cannot carry a single thing into what comes after.

They spend everything chasing you; calling it success, calling it meaning.

But I see what they refuse to admit.

They fear me because I end the game they think they are winning.

I end judgment, I end noise, I end everything that pretended to matter. 

And in the end, I do not take from them. I simply show them they were never holding anything at all.

So tell me, Life… why do they hate me, and not you?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Loving Iii Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 7:23 PM
There Charmaine is my old friend. Build up treasures in heaven.
Chircop Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 11:02 AM
Thankyou so much
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April 26, 2026 at 8:24 AM
A very thought provoking poem.Powerful Indeed!
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April 26, 2026 at 8:43 AM
Thankyou so much <3
Coleman Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 1:44 PM
This is a very well composed piece. You wrote as Death themselves in a matter that really makes your reader think. I enjoyed!
Chircop Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 9:14 AM
Thankyou so much
Buhagiar Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 4:08 AM
Death observes that humans spend their lives "chasing" life and labelling this pursuit as "success" or "meaning". The poem suggests that this is a "game they think they are winning," which death eventually ends.
Chircop Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 9:14 AM
Thankyou for your comment!
Sheehan Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 5:03 PM
Fantastic piece. It really captures the essence of death. Looking forward to more of your work. Powerful pen. Enjoyed immensely.
Chircop Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 7:11 AM
Thank you so much!
bard Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 12:30 AM
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April 13, 2026 at 7:38 AM
Thank you so much!
bard Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 12:32 AM
They fear me because I end the game that they are winning Powerful wisdom Well done Christina I look forward to more from you Blessings Douglas
Daniels Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 5:41 PM
A lovely personification of Death, Christina. You’ve captured the distorted fallacy that humans project onto life. Well done. Shine on.
Chircop Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 7:37 AM
Thank you so much, I really appreciate!
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