I Am But a Speck

Below me sweeps a thousand feet
Of air and nothing more,
Precipices fall away
Yet stir me to the core.

Yawning chasms, with evil gape
Scare a mortal soul,
Oh, but is there elsewhere
A spirit feels so whole. 

In that moment there I stood
Heaven, surely found.
I am but a speck upon this earth,
High above the ground.





Entry for
In The Moment Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Heidi Sands
14/6/18. Placed 3rd.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/24/2018 3:59:00 PM
Congratulations on a beautiful win, Gary!
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/24/2018 4:05:00 PM
Thank you Ralph :)
Date: 6/22/2018 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful well-written poem! Great imagery.
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/22/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 6/20/2018 8:54:00 AM
This was a very well deserved win, gary. I really like your style!!!
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/20/2018 9:08:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :)
Date: 6/18/2018 12:45:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win poem, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/18/2018 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2018 9:31:00 AM
Beautifully written Gary. Thanks for sharing this with us. Congratulations for your win :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/18/2018 10:58:00 AM
Thank you Heidi :)
Date: 6/13/2018 9:12:00 PM
Wonderful penning Gary! You have my vote ;) good luck in the contest! xomo
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/14/2018 5:03:00 AM
Thank you Maureen :)
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